That was ridiculously, fantastically, spectacularly wonderful! Good god, you portrayed Sasuke's emotions and vulnerability and uncertainty so powerfully, and Naruto! Holy hell, Naruto! ALWAYS look underneath the underneath with these sneaky shinobi. Is Naruto simple? Is he a bonehead? Is he easy to understand and to read? Hm, better to ask, is he a shinobi? Has he survived and triumphed when it appeared he should not? So complex, and twisty and turny. GORGEOUS! Loved it just too too much.

I love it! The story had so many twist it wasn't the quick sex that didn't really mean anything it was all plan out and thought of who knew Sasuke had a soft side lol I'll make sure to read some of your other pieces

Awwwwwww cute! Loved it! It has the right amount of fluff and romance without being overly sappy. Well done!

Ah, that was just so amazing and one of the best examples of why we all love this pairing. The emotions between them were so real and so very true on Sasuke's part it makes the story beyond believable. So well written and I absolutely loved it.

ha the sweet/cute. well written 2.

This was absolutely fantastic! You gave just the right amount of true character in their argument to 'make up for' (if you can call it that) the slight OOC (out of characterness) later. An awesome M scene too :)

Keep up the amazing work! Good luck :)

This story is adorable! Great job!

Lovelove,

Saya

Love it. In character and quite hot.

My only complaint is you used this sentence "His head fell back to the thin pillows Naruto had stolen from him what seemed like an eternity ago" in two consecutive paragraphs.

But anyway, great fic. I love the awkward-first-time SasuNaru ones when they're done right.

hmmm... nice story..

I have no words to describe how brilliantly you've written this. This is just EPIC

And Kakashi's all nonchalant about everything; we love you, man!

so goooood. i've read this several times and even so oh man was that great to read. unbelievably sexy but also so thoughtful and a great character analysis. very IC imo, even for a story written so long ago. it still feels like them. i love sasuke in this.

and i don't think it's cliche in the slightest, unless you just meant that oh it starts with them sharing a bed on a mission, kakashi happens to be out... but that'd be the exact sort of situation that would bring about this scenario. and it could've happened. ah i love it so much! i loved naruto, too, btw. hm. the dialogue for him and his reactions and sasuke's reactions to him and how he knew naruto... ah great stuff. really good. and hot. too hot for this time of night. heh.

I'm not much of a reader of Naruto x Sauske fics...but that was great! So good!

oh. my. GOD. amazing. no thats a understatement. it was... perfect. i loved it. it flowed. it made sense. it could happen if in the actual series Sasuke decided to get his gead out of his ass and come back to Konoha. i can totally see it happening. it was definitely realistic in that aspect. you write lemons amazingly too. so im just gonna stop there before i embarass myself with that subject but you should totally write more romance. rated M obviously. well and rated T i suppose but definitely more M.

I love it! How vulnerable Sasuke is and how Naruto comforts him even without really trying. :)