|Reviews for Emerald Jewels|
| blackfox5000 chapter 1 . 3/9
XD that was very beautiful it complete the love uet sadness, Helga. Has in her heart it was very lovely.
| RollZLX chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
Very nice! And very true to life.
| 2lazy2login chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
I stumbled upon this, and though I am not a fan of poetry, I really admire this poem. Keep up the good work!
| GhostHelwig chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
Wow, that was... that was beautiful. Poetry on this site intimidates me because poetry is easy to ruin and hard to get right, but I'm so glad you mentioned this to me because I never would've found it on my own and that would've been a travesty. I really hope you continue to write poetry, because this was an absolutely lovely poem. And you really captured Helga with this. Plus, the imagery was very vivid and very, very beautiful. I applaud you. This was deep, meaningful, and wonderful. Rock on.
| r1k1t1k1t4v1 chapter 1 . 10/17/2002
Really lovely poem.
But y'know, I bet you could present this as original poetry and no one'd be the wiser.
| Neo chapter 1 . 4/4/2001
You're right about the eyes ... or so says someone who I think is an expert on HA!
Nice poem, sweet.
| mimi the fat circus lady chapter 1 . 2/2/2001
it was good. make it so that Arnold accidentally finds the poem and is determined to find out who wrote such a beautiful poem... and even see who it was written to... tee hee
| chipsNdip chapter 1 . 1/12/2001
This is very beautifully written, no complaints here. A pure joy to read!
| Alicia Y chapter 1 . 1/12/2001
i loved this. it was cool
| Sabrina2001To lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 1/12/2001
That was so poetic, I mean compared to my songs and poems, I suck you rule!
| jeni chapter 1 . 1/12/2001
| Tamazin chapter 1 . 1/12/2001
That was a beautigul poem..you have talent. I really enjoyed reading it, and I'm not all that fond of poetry...Good work!