|Reviews for What I Did On My Holiday|
| Flamin' June chapter 1 . 2/21/2004
Smashing! I particularly liked
"You little b..."
The exclamation remained unfinished. A cloud of dust cannot swear.
Just one little criticism - punctuation goes inside quotes at the end of speech, e.g. "I'm so very sorry, Great-Uncle," said Giles.
| zanthinegirl chapter 1 . 2/18/2004
Great story. I like Giles' uncle, sorry we can't meet him again! I'll look forward to reading more of your work...