I am SO HAPPY you updated! I absolutely love this story, it is one of the most creative of it's kind by far! Wonderful writing in this chapter - definitely opened up another subplot! 9A couple, actually...)

Awesome work!

Oh wow! That was... unexpected! I think i scared my family running around the house though... haha. This new capter is wonderful! Thank you so much! *loves even more* Well, since it didnt really happen last time, i WILL wait avidly. Promise.

Once again, Good Luck! *hug*

Aw, poor Ryou! I feel so bad for him. and the potions lessons... I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes.

The description of Ryou being tired makes ME tired, haha. Great work with this chapter. I love how you're building the tension and I can't wait to see what Bakura and Malik have planned for Hogwarts. XD Please do write more soon!

~firedraygon97

you have no idea how happy i was when i saw you update. i really, really missed this fic. i like how utterly defeated ryou is, and how unbeleivably cruel the spirit is. its fitting, and i really think thats how their relationship is. ryou is a possession.

i love how both blaise and draco have become protective of ryou. want to know why...is it cause of snape? and what was malik up to? im loving every minute of this!

ryou is getting closer and closer to a melt down...i can FEEL it.

now im wondering, this is obviously a slash/yaoi fic, but i cant help but wonder how far has the spirit gone with ryou? perhaps ive gotta go back and read the chapters again (since its been months and months since ive read them), but i was just wondering. everything that the spirit does to ryou is sexual.

i do suggest to add scene breaks. i got confused a few times when there was a change. there are a few grammer and spelling mistakes, but they wrent too distracting. if ya want a beta, id gladly help out.

im waiting anxiously for the next chapter...and until then, gotta reread this fic.

tri

Well, I re-read the entire story again in order to remember what was going on, but I'm glad. This chapter was a bit confusing, however. Maybe you could use something to separate the scenes? Because I get thrown off when the scene changes, and I didn't notice.

For this paragraph,

"History of Magic ended and the two boys who had been sticking so close to Ryou almost had to run to keep up with his leaving the classroom. Professor Lupin had been about to speak to him but there was no way, no way he would stay and find out why. Instead, they made record time to History of Magic."

Should it be Defense Against the Dark Arts ended instead of History? I was confused at that. The whole scene in Divination just baffled me. I couldn't seem to understand what was going on no matter how many times I read it. Maybe you could explain that? haha unless it was supposed to be confusing. There were other things as well, but I can't seem to find them again.

Anyway, other than the confusion, this was a great chapter. I loved the tiny bit of fluff you added in there with Ryou and Bakura. I can't wait for your next update!

-Lyn

G-GASP. YOU UPDATED. E, I'm so happy!

Anyways, another terrific chapter. The plot is getting, ooh, more cool and stuff. :3 You're doing a great job at telling us enough to keep us satisfied, but still keeping us in the dark. I only saw I think three typos; and they were all only one letter was typed instead of another, so I won't even bother pointing them out. I wouldn't worry about it, I didn't see any typos worth fixing.

Thank you! Thank you! Update soon!

Yay! Horray for another chapter. _ It was worth the wait; this story is always a pleasure to read.

I look forward to more fun interactions between Bakura and Ryou's classmates. It's fun watching him tease as well as frighten.

Thanks so much!

that was a fantasic chapter - thank you so much for not neglecting the story

I can't wait until Ryou gains even the teensiest of backbone and stand up for himself, that way, he's not just a little kitten, although a very adorable and skittish one at that.

Malik's in Hogwarts - I expected that to happen, but in the form of a mysterious Englishman. Ooh, what complications shall arise?

I don't know why, but I can imagine Ryou - being under so much turmoil and stress - to just snap and unleash a Cruciatus curse, although it's not really in his nature, if someone messes with him past his breaking point - say... playing with his 'dolls'? It's a weird thought though P Imagine just what his uncle would think!

Can't wait for the next chapter! Have fun writing.

i love it. update soon.

I think im going to have a stroke because of this! LOVE IT!

i guess ill just wait avidly for the next chapter

Best of luck to you! *love*

Wow. I just found this story and it's so awesome. It's the best YGO and HP crossover I've read yet. I really like how you only have Ryou in it. Plus you seem to have Bakura in character. A lot of people make him nice and stuff. It's interesting how Ryou is in Slytherin. Is that because of his Yami or himself? I wasn't quite sure when I read about the sorting. Does Draco know about who Ryou really is? He'd probably be a lot meaner if he did. But since they're going to Hogsmead will they meet up with any Deatheaters or something. Wouldn't Voldemort or Marik/Malik be getting annoyed about Bakura's lack of well being there I guess. Will anyone else ever find out about Bakura? I have a feeling Nott's going to do something bad and Bakura will turn him into a doll and that's how they'll find out. Or something like that. Anyway I like how you portray the Slytherins they're mean and stuff but their still human. But they must really think Ryou's crazy, talking to himself and having those freaky dolls. Although Malfoy’s reaction to the dolls surprised me. I didn't think he'd be freaked out. I don't know why I thought so though. I also wonder what Yugi-tachi have been doing this whole time. They must have been suspicious. Since they don’t know about Ryou’s father sending him away they probably thought Bakura did something. Or maybe they’re too naïve. It’s also interesting how you’ve incorporated the dolls of people. I didn’t know Ryou kept them. But what happened to the two he left with Voldemort? I also wonder what would happen if someone tried to play a prank on him by doing something to the dolls because they don’t know they’re alive… kinda. Or if someone accidentally broke one. Well please try and update soon. I can’t wait to see what happens next. You’re a really good author and your story is really really really interesting. I’m adding it to my favorites, so please update soon. I really want to see what happens next. Thanks for writing as much as you have it was so very fun to read a well writing good story. _

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Is Draco (or anyone for that matter) gonna find out about Bakura?

*cough**cough*

Love it, write more!

Love,

Amanda

Hey, hey, you, you, you really need to update! No way, no way, I don't think I can wait!

No, seriously, updating with chapter 16 need to be happing! This story is bloody brilliant!