Reviews for Continued Survival
Ryous lil Tenshi chapter 15 . 1/30/2007
HOMFG JUST THE FACT THAT YOURE EDITING IS BRILLIANT! I hope you update soon! And I don't just mean one chapter. Oh, no, you're not getting away with that. XP PLEASE? Can we have regular updates? Or semi-regular? Or at least something more regular than once a year? I am such a fan of your work. XD

And you have to be paranoid about Yaoi/Slash. XD More people like it than those that don't, actually, hehehehe.

Either way, I eagerly away your update!

LynLin chapter 15 . 1/29/2007
ANYWAY...I guess I can't review anymore. It says taht I've reviewed all the chapters. Darn. haha I really love your story and I hope you can update soon! ] Have I also forgotten to mention that I love the fact that you put all the dolls in this story? And that you manage to make Ryou a little psychotic while somehow maintaining a glimpse of sanity? That takes some true talent.

I'll be waiting!

LynLin chapter 10 . 1/29/2007
No matter how much you disliked this chapter, I liked it. That's probably all that matters anyway. LOL just kidding? haha anyway, the scene breaks aren't working in this chapter either (it was kind of confusing), but I guess it's because you haven't edited this one yet? *MUAH*

LynLin chapter 9 . 1/29/2007
Hm...cute little Bakura being nice to Ryou moments. I like those. haha

LynLin chapter 8 . 1/29/2007
Well, the scene breaks work in this chapter. Maybe it's just the previous ones? Or one? haha I don't remember anymore _ and let me just say, I really love your style. The way you write is just so mesmerizing. It's so gothic, morbid, and just a tiny bit of humor. It's totally the way a fic about Bakura or Ryou (or both) should be. Have I said it enough? I LOVE it. And you, of course.

LynLin chapter 7 . 1/29/2007
Ah, I just noticed something. Either something's wrong with the scene breaks in this fic, or you chose not to have them at all. Either way, it's a little confusing how it suddenly jumps from one point of view to another. Just wanted to mention it. And then to say that I love you. Because I'm happy. And you made me that way. _~

LynLin chapter 6 . 1/29/2007
I really like the pace you're going at. It's not overly dramatic or fast, and it's not so slow that it bores me to death. ]

LynLin chapter 5 . 1/29/2007
Wee I'm having so much fun reading this again. Makes me happy.

LynLin chapter 4 . 1/29/2007
Hmm...maybe there's like, a couple of grammar mistakes, but the overall flow of the story works so well that I hardly even notice. I'm just a little obsessive compulsive about that. haha still loving it..

LynLin chapter 3 . 1/29/2007
Love love loving it.

LynLin chapter 2 . 1/29/2007
Gonna review for every chapter. It's that great. I like how Marik calls Ryou "kitten." It's so...iono. I just like it. ]

LynLin chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
Hmm I only got one alert from your editing, but I didn't mind. It just gave me another chance to procrastinate on my hw and start re-reading this wonderful story again. haha

8808 chapter 15 . 1/26/2007
I love the psychological development of Ryou, it's making the whole story so real and bitter and sad. Bakura is for once the real bastard he should be, so thanks for not polluting him with excessive fluff. This is seriously the BEST YGO HP crossover I have ever read-congratulations!

You have amazing skills at writing heart wrenching emotions and plot,God the plot...This story has A Soul.

And Ryou is so real, so human. His character actually makes sense, for once (on fanfiction net). After all the shit you made him go through, his personality reflects everything, EVERYTHING it should have. All the other minor characters makes me interested as well, and WOHOO! YAOI!

The think is, you made even the Yaoi realistic. At least for Ryou. It makes sense to me, actually the whole story does. OH! And did I mention Ryou has an amazing personality? That thing with dolls, GOD you REALLY are a talented author. The little signs of insanity, desperation, a call for help. *sigh*

I don't know what else to say. This story really made me feel something and I would be extremely grateful to read some more, please.

Well done. I would be eagerly awaiting to read more.*favs*

Your new fan
ryuu chapter 15 . 12/31/2006
Whoa, time flies... It's already been so long since you last update.

Hope a new chapter is coming soon? Cuz this story is simply too great to be abandon!
nobody-nobody-nobody chapter 15 . 12/31/2006
it's been so long since this fanfic had an update, I really hope you haven't forgotten about this. It really is well-written and it has so many fans )

I hope you'll update this every once in awhile.
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