|Reviews for Inner Strength|
| mdizzle999872 chapter 1 . 8/11/2004
i hope you write a sequel to this. i want to see more ron/yori fluff.
| ss3dj chapter 1 . 6/19/2004
great fic. I loved every bit of it. Like everyone else has said this could be an episode. please write another fic like this one please!
| Geor-sama chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
Cute, I agree with everyone, this could almost pass as an episode
| R.J.B chapter 1 . 4/14/2004
sentence by sentence
Word for word
description by description
shot description by shot description,
This could be made into a real episode!
| Ms4Monkey chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
Well the story itself was interesting. I'm not to fond of script writing fanfics though, but you did well.
Most people were in character, but I do have to point out, I WILL NEVER KNEEL TO RON!...
That's all I wanted to say. I would have probably tried to get the Lotus Blade from Ron in that situation, or make an escape, but NOT KNEEL TO HIM!
Well anyway, nice story. You’re going in the right direction putting Monkey Fist in your story. *evil laugh* Good day.
| Shedemei chapter 1 . 2/23/2004
Awesome sequel to "Exchange!" Everyone was completely in character and the battle scenes were intense...you have some serious potential!
| Yamal chapter 1 . 2/20/2004
Not bad at all. Seems like a TV episode. I'm not very into script written fanfics, but forgetting about that. It was a good story, hehe. Interesting and funny. _ Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the good work.