Reviews for Time Off
HannahSakura.Pinoy chapter 2 . 5/18/2007
I love the fic!
Kimpatsu no Hoseki chapter 7 . 10/14/2006
great job! is there a sequal with Robin and Michael going out and STN-J hunting Sara?
SafirePhoenix chapter 6 . 6/19/2006
aw, come on! there was hardly anything between michael and robin! they didn't even kiss on the lips!
The White Raven chapter 1 . 3/1/2006
I have read your story last year and didn't have a chance to review. Love it, love it, love it!

Now reading the sequals you wrote I noticed that you have now added the usual prolug "Three hundred and twenty years have past..."

My frinds and I have been throwing ideas back and forth what could be a prolog and this is what we came up with...

"Three hundred and twenty years have past

Since the coven sank in the dark...

A vengeful malice...

Suppressed affections...

Reckless hate...

As time flows between souls reaching out to touch hearts, so too can it touch the darkness as the hunter beccomes the hunted."

maybe not the best but, you get the idea.

Keep writing!
psquare chapter 3 . 1/21/2006
Um... do decide about what Sakaki's making for Kosaka. one line says tea, the next says he's making coffee, and the next says that he's taking the tea out of the room.

And it's "mannequin", not "manikin".

Will get around to reviweing the entire story at the end.
Foolish Mortal chapter 2 . 12/22/2005
Oh, sorry, for some reason, I thought this was a MxS fic. Ops! Great story though, I really like it.
Foolish Mortal chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
I love this thing so far! Powers to distort time. My friends and I were talking about the kinds of witch powers we would want and can you believe that mine WAS the power to control time? Even though Zaizen is a bit OOc, I still loved the line about "the evil VCR hunting us." very awesome! Hooray for Michael; he can go outside again! Yay!

Oh, and if you're into Michael x Sakaki, check out my fanfic, When Hacker Met Sakaki. Also, I'm probably putting this fanfic in my C2, which is all about Michael, Sakaki, and Michael x Sakaki!
MiraResQNU chapter 6 . 7/13/2005
Okay- yes you finished this a long time ago but I still felt the need to let you know that this was a very well planned, well written story. I actually started reading another of your WHR stories before I realized they were continued serials. So I'm very happy now because I have a whole bunch of reading to do. Thanks very much! I'm glad you're doing a MichaelxRobin pairing- They don't get enough attention in fanfic. Keep up the exceptional writing! _
seisuke chapter 6 . 6/3/2005
Hello there! I just wanted to say that I really liked this story. :) I read this in the Usuyami no Sekai website when I stumbled into it by accident. :) I really like the robinXmichael pairing. :) (i also liked the sequel. :) i think it was fire and ... water...? oops... gomen, i guess i forgot... (sweatdrop))
kate chapter 1 . 9/4/2004
Need more pronouns. Too Choppy. Needs work.
LPfan66 chapter 6 . 8/2/2004
*clapping* That was a very good story! I loved every minute of it. My favorite part was when Micheal shot the guy in the forehead...that was so cool. But now I want to know what happens with Sarah... is she going to plan revenge on STN-J? Will Robin and Micheal's relationship grow? PLEASE WRITE A SEQUEL!

A fan of your writings,

LPfan66
FluffysGirl229 chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
i like it
RakuenKit chapter 3 . 6/19/2004
that is so cute I think I shed a tear _
Dark'sGirl chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
WOW. Write more. there aren't enough michael/robin fics out there.
emotionlessgothicgirl chapter 7 . 4/16/2004
I wonder if theres a sequel?...Better check...anyway I loved it. _
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