This was great! A fun read. Hope you’re doing well.

revive and update this please

Nice start!

Awwww Dang it why did it end so soooooon, 3 great story, I hope you take it up again!

this is reall awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!

I hope you continue this story someday

This is great cannot wait for the next chapter. Hope it will not take too long.

is ranma ever going to become a boy again

Great chaptert and story so far please continue this story soon.

What a pity it's not continued.

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On the infants forehead the signal of Mars flicked for a moment in response before fading back into dormancy.

I think it's sigel not signal.

Wait if Ranma is the first detected Senshi rebirth then you have the outers as being younger than Ranma. Mamoron too? The prologue might need a tweak or two.

You called the Kinjankan and Gekkaja twin weapons. If their designs or abilities were the same I could accept that but they are a set not a match. That would make them sibling weapons. Just like you can't say a fork is twin to a spoon even if their part of the same place setting.

With the Fire bending around Ranma did this one somehow fail to learn the Amaguriken with fire for that reason?

So this Hino Rei is Ranma after being reverted to 8 years old... Um was the male form burned to death?

It looks like the brackets for italics on the Flashback got broken. Yeah the italic markers aren't working I think they want you to format them differently here.

Purple hair and red eyes? Is this woman somehow an older Saturn? Pluto/Setsuna has always had green hair from my memory. Or is it a Tenchi cameo Ayeka would be close to that description. Oops guess I was wrong I don't know this character though.

So it was all glamor I kinda figured it would have been Pluto but the hair color choice... There are more natural ones.

I enjoyed it just thought you'd like what was passing through my head while reading.

I'm not sure that I did help beta this... Busy with allot of things since 07 though so I might have. Are you going to continue it?

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weird...but interesting.

*reading and reviewing at the same time* hahahaha can't wait to see what happens next!

i have enjoyed the story so far but i see no update for the past year please update soon i would like to know how ranma handles becoming a sailor senshi.

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7winds

i quite like this story i hope you update soon