Reviews for Spring Break: Fun in Paradise
Smexy Kitten chapter 3 . 7/11/2013
This story is really entertaining! I hope that you will continue it someday :)
dela490 chapter 3 . 1/14/2009
hello. it's a very interesting story that you've written. But I can also see that it makes five years til your last update. You must keep writing your story because it's so good, I want to read the next. So please update soon. Don't make us wait.
Sonzai Taz chapter 3 . 5/22/2007
hey U gonna update anytime soon coz its been a reeaallyy long time since the last update! sry if it sounded a bit rude but PLZ update fast!
arriane chapter 2 . 4/15/2006
i realy liked this chapter! hope you'd finish the next one.
Cristina Gomez chapter 3 . 2/26/2005
Why? Why? Why won't you update! Please I' have been waiting so long for you to update! Emphasis on the "long"! Please update! I want to see what happens now that they are in Hawaii! Lucky people get a vacation in Hawaii, while stuck here in California having to do Algebra homework until like 12:30 p.m. I wish Kurama was my teacher so I wouldn't have to woory about school or at least have Hiei as my teacher so I could learn the Dragon of the Darkness Flame and burn down the school! (evil laugh) HAHAHAHAHAHA! Okay please update soon!
Cristina Gomez chapter 3 . 1/17/2005
Aw, ya had to stop. Stupid josh moving in on Botan. No one should move in on Botan except soon.
learntosayhello chapter 3 . 1/4/2005
UPDATE! YOu haven't in almost a year! this story is too good!
Cristina Gomez chapter 3 . 10/30/2004
Please write more. I love it when Kurama gets jelous over Botan. I thought he was going to turn into Yoko to get that Josh guy away from his woman. I love this story, update soon.
wandering dragon chapter 3 . 7/2/2004
THANK YOU!

I have missed this story for so long and u finaly updated and i love the conflict between hiei and Kuwabara please let kuwabara find out about yukinia being hieis sister (kuwabara would go what then faint and hiei could say u idout and kick him) ( or someting like that) ( if u do make it funny realy funny) please please please

thank you agin i realy love this story

bye for now,

wandering dragon
naomi chapter 3 . 7/2/2004
UH OH FOX-BOY IS GETTING JEALUOSE EVERYONE IT'S ONE OF THE SIGHS OF THE END OF THE WORLD RUN FOR THE BUNKERS!*everyone starts screaming bloody hell and eventually die*

dm{dark me}:*eating popcorn* ah...the entertainment is over!

ME;*sweatdrop*WELL ANYWAYS FOR HIEI'S PAIRING I WAS THINKING THEY GO TO A LUOW OR SOMETHING AND THERE ON THE STAGE THET SEE A FEMALE FIRE DANCER U KNOW THOSE PEOPLE WHO TWIRL THOSE STICKS THAT HAVE FLAMES ON THE END OF THEM OR THEY GO TO THE BEACH AND MEET A TALENTED SURFER GIRL THAT HAS A A ATTITUDE BUT NICE AND HARD CORE AT THE SAME TIME.

DM:Hn...good luck the fic and update soon.
Passionate Angel chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
Well this review is actually on time lol.

Wow Kurama seemed really jealous of Josh.(just goes to show you how much he cares for Botan _)

a very enjoyable chapter and I hope to see another update soon.
PrettyKitty688 chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
I loved this story so far! Sorry I didn't review on the other chapters. So when do you think you will update yet? I added you to my favorite authors and stories! And if you don't mind, will you email me at and tell me when you updated any of you stories? I loved your other story, Girls Just Want To Have Fun as well! And I LOVE the pairing Botan and Kurama! You are a great author and I hope you keep writing because I will always be there to read your stories! ~BlazingBotan~
blue-eyed-shuichi chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
Hey there!

Cool! You updated! Awesome! I really like this story and I'm glad to see that you're working on it once again.

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I really found the luggage problem highly amusing in particular Kuwabara telling Hiei to go in and retrieve their bags. Quite funny!

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And Kurama is feeling a little jealous is he? The kitsune better get his butt into gear and pursue Botan or he'll miss his chance to have the girl of his dreams!

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Good job and of course I look forward to more. As to an update from me, well, I'm about halfway through with my chapter. I'll probably have it up by Monday, we'll see.

JD
Kazie-chan chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
This story is awsome! Please, Please continue soon! Chapter 2 was especially funny!
Arienis chapter 2 . 5/27/2004
AWESOME! YOU MUST CONTINUE!
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