Reviews for Force of Destiny
Acacia Jules chapter 18 . 5/24
I think parts of your dialogue are missing. At the beginnings of sentences.
Guest chapter 34 . 4/30
Poor Dr Hanley! He gets no love :P
Guest chapter 22 . 4/30
Hahaha, Anakin's snarky!
Guest chapter 5 . 4/30
LOL
Guest chapter 4 . 4/30
Never thought I would read the words "the sleeping Sith." What a wonderful tale. :)
Guest chapter 3 . 4/30
You have the best ideas. And humor!
Dirtkid123 chapter 34 . 4/15
OH MY GOD... THIS IS STUPENDOUSLY BRILLIANT! PLEASE PROMISE ME THAT YOURE PLANNING ON WRITING MORE! This is too good a story to be abandoned and forgotten.
Dragonjek chapter 17 . 2/25
You seem to have a problem with your quotation marks.
Danyael Prince chapter 17 . 2/19
Quite a few lines have been missing from the last couple of chapters...

And the editing has made the same chapters a bit hard to read...
tael chapter 34 . 12/19/2016
10 years later no update... dead fic. wondering if author is still alive...
Susan M. M chapter 34 . 12/12/2016
And yet another abandoned story. :(
Susan M. M chapter 18 . 12/11/2016
Formatting complaint: no scene breaks make the story unnecessarily awkward, throwing the reader off-balance. The lack of quotation marks is annoying. Several paragraphs start with a comma, as if a sentence had been deleted.
Plot compliment: I like the way the dominoes are falling in this AU.
Susan M. M chapter 12 . 12/10/2016
Now that's an unexpected twist.
Susan M. M chapter 7 . 12/10/2016
A very believable problem with the pump, one that could easily work in BSG, Baa Baa Black Sheep, or seaQuest DSV, and not too different from GBS' Arms and the Man. Bureaucratic screw-ups are universal.
Susan M. M chapter 4 . 12/10/2016
This is the second best Piett I've ever seen.
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