|Reviews for Force of Destiny|
| Vi-Violence chapter 18 . 18h ago
This chapter needs some editing, some things that should be there just aren't.
| Jambee chapter 23 . 3/18
#So different having Anakin at this scene with Jabba and the barge. neat
| the.drizzling.rain chapter 5 . 3/1
'Vader sat down on the bed. "Bureaucrats", he muttered, making the word sound like an obscenity.'
LOL. You just managed to make him sound just like my dad. XD
| Azure Gryphon chapter 18 . 12/22/2013
I am really enjoying this story. However there are a couple minor technical problems which I would like to bring to your attention. It seems pretty common for the first word in all the dialogue parts in this chapter and others to be entirely absent, leaving the reader slightly confused. Also, there are no quotation marks around the dialogue either. I do like your story and hope that these are minor enough things that you wouldn't mind going back to fix them.
| Guest chapter 34 . 12/6/2013
So sad to see that this is abandoned.
| Vi-Violence chapter 33 . 11/4/2013
Yay, figured out my problem, (it was a font size thing), I love this, please update.
| Vi-Violence chapter 34 . 11/3/2013
Okay, either there's something wrong on my end, or every chapter after chapter 14 is just not there. Let me know if that gets fixed, I was enjoying reading this fic and would really like to be able to read the rest of it.
| Vi-Violence chapter 15 . 11/3/2013
You seem to have a void chapter.
| MsChellie's Designs chapter 34 . 10/6/2013
Please, Please, Please complete the story, love it.
| KleinerFieserEwok chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
It's one of the best ff about Vader turning back to the lightside I've ever read. And it's pretty realistic that it's still a long way for him to go- in many stories of that kind he just had turned over night from the Sith warlord back into a jedi. But for me, Anakin and Vader aren't that much different.
I admire your extensive plotline and the charakterizations, especially Vader and Han were great to read. I loved the Han-Vader-interaction at Jabba's. *snickers* Made me laugh so hard. They aren't that different, are they? Lol, how Leia freaked out after hearing the truth about here father- and slapped him across the face. First Solo, then his daughter- I almost feel sorry for him. Leia clearly inherited her father's temper. :D
I always assumed it's likely Sidious doing such cruel things to get absolute control over his apprentice...
That man is one sadistic manipulating bastard.
But- Padme alive? Really? I didn't like that twist of events. Don't get me wrong, but she should be dead. She just doesn't fit in here.
Wow, that was long ;)
Last but not least...
Could you please continue this story? PLEEEASE! :3
I'm not the first one telling you this- but it's such a waste for not completing this! You were almost done with it! I'm dying of curiosity, but I assume you won't finish , except in your next life
I'm sorry for my language errors, but I'm learning English for only 3 years. :)
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/7/2013
No quotation marks. This isn't just about grammar pedantry, this actually stops you from being able to understand.
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/7/2013
THE FONT SIZE! MY EYES ARE BURNING!
| ShotgunWilly chapter 17 . 5/8/2013
You need to re-upload this and last chapter. Your dialog and formatting got ruined. It's horrible to read.
| hallie chapter 12 . 5/7/2013
in chapter 11, showown, Deborah found out that she was being followed, when she ran inside, she told her mother what had happend. Marry got up because she heard the dog barking constantly. Marry told Deborah to go and get a musket and load it up, while she was doing that, Marry herself got a musket and started to load the one she had in her hand. Dan said that
| pronker chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Out of many AUs of the saga, this is one of the best!