Reviews for Lonely Child
SaJi chapter 1 . 10/16/2006
Very well done, I really loved the emotion of this piece.
Jenn1 chapter 1 . 5/28/2005
Wow, this was moving. It can set up what may happen in T4, if they make it.
Evilclone chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Now how can i ignore those "pleading eyes" puppy like eyes? Yes i thinks it's very good, don't listen to the halobird "repetetive" ft to her/him not sure. It's a shame you coulnd't have put the bit right at the end where he talks on the intercom and says his name, i think that would've been great!
charmingsyrai chapter 1 . 9/9/2004
Really great! Loved it, that's exactly how I'd picture his feelings! And a big fat plus is that you've written it very well :)
HopeOfTheFuture chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
Very cool short story. I really like it! Good use of Connor's thoughts.
Mat chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
This story is absolutely sensational. Congratulations on writing such a touching, perfectly narrated story. You deserve a lot of praise for this. It is wonderful.
ArmWild chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
It's so so... I dare say that you're maybe a bit..repetetive?
elfin2 chapter 1 . 5/1/2004
A really depressing piece of introspection. It's damn good writing.
RobertaAnn chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
I liked your take on the thoughts of John Connor. The Terminator verse has lived with me for many years also.
Laura7 chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
Nicely written. I've always loved all the angst and conflicting emotions that John Conner experienced in T3 and I think you wrote him nicely. You really have John down.