|Reviews for In Medias Res|
| PackageDelivery chapter 1 . 7/10/2005
PLEASE KEEP GOING,IT'S STATING TO GET GOOD.
I BEG OF U TO LET MOKUBA LIVE
| The Freak in the Shadows chapter 1 . 4/21/2005
| Mellaithwen chapter 8 . 12/4/2004
Haven't read Yugi fanfiction in ages but this is really good! Poor Yami! (I rather him toYugi) Any Yami angst on the way? please? Great story!
| Hikari Daeron chapter 1 . 11/13/2004
Me: Ehehehe, she doesn't appricate bein' insulted. You need to understand my book in order to understand her marriage. It's really not that gross.
Me: -_-U So I guess Y-
Myarra: *stopping me from continuing* Cere is RIGHT here, ya know.
Ceribi: ... what were you gonna say? HMM?
Me: Nothing. *feigned innocence* Good chappie.
| Phoenixfire-k chapter 8 . 10/17/2004
Clearly, tonight is the night for me to review things. This chapter, was... short. But you've brought the heroes into a loose alliance; given them more reason to fight as a team than the simple fact that they would all die otherwise. You saw in Inu Yasha where he and Sesshomaru "teamed up" to fight the panther demons (I was so stoked when that aired on Adult Swim), right? They wound up at each others' throats and barely functioned as a unit, so it wasn't half as cool as it could have been. The moral of this anecdote: I'm gtlad that won't happen here. And Seto's out of the hosptial! Yay! _
On to the other stuff I wanted to say. I'm currently enrolled at Ohio Weslyan University, which if you haven't heard of it, is a little ways north of Columbus. I think it would be awesome to meet you at Ohayo-con, if you are actually interested. It'd be pretty cool to actually meet a fellow author. When excatly is that, anyway?
As for that chili you told me to try. I had to buy a box, and... it was all right. Not the best stuff I've ever had, but then again, I'm not really a big chili eater, so that might have something to do with it.
That chess tourney sounded cool. Not exactly the same thing, but I recently got a chance to play in a DCI-sanctioned Magic the Gathering tournament. There was only about 10 people there, but I did manage to place 3rd. Everyone there made fun of me for playing Yugioh... it reminded me why I stopped playing the game in the first place. Bunch of jerks...
I'm nearly done with the next chapter in yugioh vs pokemon, which hopefully won't be as bad as last time. I'm still trying to get my prose-legs. Also, I wanted to mention that if you ever wanted to run a story idea by me, or some random anecdote, or some other such thing, my e-mail adress is (if you couldn't guess/didn't know) phoenixfirek , so feel free to drop me a line. Just be warned I'm not always super quick to respond, but I generaly will within a weeks time.
I should be going to sleep now, so as not to sleep through my Japanese class. I'll pop up again when next I can review.
| Cate Haku chapter 8 . 8/28/2004
-looks around, and cringes as she sees reviewers with sharp, pointy objects bearing down on her- Sorry, but I had to. -points at ebil people with flamethrowers and copycats who are taking the forms of her characters-
Actually, not being pressured to updating and writing has improved my stuff heaps. -points to stack of papers- but no more updates, though I shall continue to read your fics.
-is slowly getting over the fact that Bakura is dead- Good chapter by the way.
| Toboe LoneWolf chapter 7 . 8/23/2004
Aw, shoot. Forgot something. You mentioned in your review that you e-mailed me or something. Well, I didn't get it; sorry. And I can't get your e-mail via . So, this is not exactly a review for your fic. Sorry. Mucho sorry. Gomen. ... Yeah.
As for that symbol problem- well, I sent the info to a well-known author on , who's posted her info on her homepage. Her penname's [Wingleader Sora Jade]. Go to her bio page, click on homepage, scroll down through all the pink (XD) and there's a link for the 's symbol solving problem.
As for the other stuff...
Yes, I am a Christain. I hope that what I write shows that, through the hints and links.
As for my one-shot "I Love You More" - yeah, I did base it off of Matthew West's song "More." I know the words; I have the CD. In fact, he was a special guest speaker at the camp I recently went to. XD I got piccies of Mattie! I'd always wanted to do a song-fic on "More" but I couldn't get it to work 'cause well, it's God speaking/singing. But then Matthew West told us a story of how he got the idea for the song "More." And /that/ hit me, and I got the perfect idea. My fic is kinda based on his story, his song, and YGO background. I got my CD autographed by him. _ And yeah, "You Know Where To Find Me" is great; and there are great Yami/Yugi links, but I can't get a outline of a song fic for it. However, I'd say Steven Curtis Chapman's "I Will Be Here" is THE perfect Yami/Yugi bonding song. It fits so well with their entire history!
Righto. I think that's all, from what I remember. Tally ho!
| Toboe LoneWolf chapter 8 . 8/23/2004
Announcer's voice: And this is the part where LoneWolf16 profusely apoligizes for her lateness and continues for about three paragraphs.
LoneWolf16: Righto, you get the idea. Hm...I'm in a rush here 'cause my mom just yelled at me to get off the Internet, to which I have skimmed this fic in like ten minutes, thus multilating the plotline that I have in my head, which thus tells me that I am a pathetic reviewer, and here I say that I shall review a better piece on your "Guarded" series-
Djanil: Because LoneWolf16 can't take the bally time to type the title /out/-
LoneWolf16: . I'm in a RUSH here, alright?
Hm...character death be fun, character death for Bakura done way too easily. XD. Naw...Bakura's just hiding out in the Shadow Realm until he comes out and goes "POOF! THE DARKNESS HAS RETURNED!" XD. Amuses me greatly. The POV changes are a bit strange; why have Yugi go first-person? You could do more w/ third; then you can kinda get into Ebony's thoughts as well. XD I love writing the dark mind of wierdo half-physcos who like killing people. Funfunfunfun...
Djanil: -Because your own sanity is tentive...
LoneWolf16: . Whatever. Fun in any way. Go Edgar Allen Poe. PO! HIGH HO!
LoneWolf16: Righto, I'm babbling, Mom's screaming, and I'm cutting it off here-
| Phoenixfire-k chapter 7 . 8/6/2004
I...have... returned! Lousy rotten job. I was so busy I couldn't get on for an eternity! But I'm back, and now reading your stories once more. Do you still remember me? And... on with the review.
This is getting downright creepy. And cool(er). I didn't think Yami Bakura could fight, but since he is a tomb robber, I guess0 that makes sense. Still sucks that he died, though. The chess game was fun, too. I've never been to a tournament, though. What's that like?
As for your contest, the line your looking for is in Shonen Jump Volume 2, Issue 5 (number 17) on the bottom left corner of page 359 in Duel 44: Monster Fight! (part 2). I guess I'll borrow Bakura to help in a later chapter of Yugioh vs Pokemon, since the latest only needs editing (it should be up by Sunday)
Well, keep this up and write more soon, please!
| Hikari Daeron chapter 7 . 6/27/2004
Me: Oh! Oh! I KNOW WHERE THAT QUOTE IS FROM CUZ I HAVE THE LATEST ISSUE OF SHONEN JUMP AND I KNOW THAT IT'S IN THE FIRST 1-6 "EPISODES" FROM THE MAGNA!
Altariel: CALM DOWN HIKARI! And yes, I am her yami.
Me: And a pain sometimes too...
ALtariel: HIKARI! *chases me with the Frying Pan of Doom. And Death. But Mostly Doom.
Me: I THOUGHT YOU LIKED ME! DON'T MAKE ME CALL DANIEL! (her husband)
Altariel: *stops* Okay, fine...
Me: The quote is in Duel One when Ushio's hand is being controled by his greed... oh wait, that quote is "In the Shadow Games, a person's true nature is revealed to decide their fate!" So I guess that doesn't quite count... wait a sec then... oh well. Can't find it. I know I have it somewhere... oh well.
Altariel: *shakes head*
Me: Ah well, whatever. Good chappie though. *sigh* And I suppose I can't stop any more character deaths anyway... becuase I have a feeling Y-
Altariel: *hand over mouth* Shut up before Ceribi comes and hits you with the F.P.O.D.A.D.B.M.D. (short for the Frying Pan of Doom. And Death. But Mostly Doom.) for bad-mouthing her little brother.
Me: Oh, right... and I also have a feeling that BLUE EYE'S brother (note nickname from my story) will proabably die too. But I can't stop it, so... oh well. My bad luck.
| Haku Ishatar chapter 7 . 6/25/2004
Actually, I don't particularly care if there's character death... (How can I when I've killed off characters as well? -hides from fangirl wrath-)
Y. Haku: And Chihiro (Sen) is from Spirited Away.
He's mad about her... -.-
| Hikari Daeron chapter 6 . 6/13/2004
Me: Oh. My. God.
Yami Bakura is... *chokes* dead? *horrified expression* Mokuba is... nearly dead? Seto is... unstable? Yugi is... a hostage? *cries* Oh my God... my favorite characters... they're on the brink of death...
As good as this story really is, I am in shock of what you have written. Bakura...Mokuba...Seto...Yugi... and poor Ryou... Ra, please, PLEASE, bring them back... I swear to Ra if you don't bring them back I might write something drastic in New Professors, New Adventures.
Altariel: Hikari, you are in no position to make threats to a writer whom reviews your story and whose story you like.
Me: I know Yami, but... NO! HOW COULD THIS BE POSSIBLE? Still, a good story but... *cries*
| Kohaku and Haku fighting chapter 6 . 5/27/2004
GRR! I WANTED TO REVIEW FIRST! AND See, now I didn't get pushies or a muse!
Kohaku: Go eat dung, Hikari. -Hugs his Chihiro doll.-
Haku: Is that what I think it is?
Haku: Anyways, Jedi, step this way and we will discuss the most upsetting matter of the death of a certain tomb robber. -cracks muscles mercilessly- Had it have been Mariku however, I would be dancing.
Kohaku: It's for the plot, Hikari, the plot.
| Yami Kohaku chapter 5 . 5/13/2004
Poor Yugi! He better get soon quickly!
H. Kohaku: What? you read it before me? Oh that's it Yami, I'm out to get you now.
I'm really scared... /sarcasm.
Anyways, this is great, and don't put that Pocky around Haku, she hates the stuff.
| DJ Lady Moony chapter 4 . 5/6/2004
I LOVE THIS STORY! MORE MORE MORE!