Reviews for Doctor Who: The Infection SPECIAL EDITION
Jetplague chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
Ok...I've just put up a new version of my old Doctor Who story. And I've encountered some glitches in the process. Gr. The page brakes didn't get put it as it uploaded so now I have go back and fix them. Otherwise it just runs on and on with no breaks at all. UGH! This thing is frustrating sometimes. Please bear with me as I correct it.
Psy-chic-Suzanne chapter 1 . 2/25/2004
I haven't read it all, because I'm in a hurry. However...
The premise is interesting, if not terribly unique. Your writing style isn't really gripping, though-writing in present tense seems to take away from the story, not to mention that I noticed at least one place where you switched to past tense for a few sentences.
Oh, and a pet peeve of mine... TARDIS. It's an acronym-all capital letters. But that's just me...
I'll finish this story and read the others. Your writing is good, but there's room for improvement-cheers!
AniseAvP chapter 1 . 2/24/2004
A real good story. Very entertaining.
Anise.