Reviews for Unstoppable
RipleyHedwig chapter 1 . 8/5/2014
Cute. Absolutely loved it.
Well written and it flowed nicely.
Even laughed a bit at the Leo hate. Very good story. Thank you. :)
LifeIsJustAGame chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
Omg I love this :D Chris is so so lush :3 This is really good! :D xxx
TracesOfTrueLove chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
I love this story, but I hate how you portray Leo. Leo is a babe.
Wragziez chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
Lovely, hot, funny story this is!
Just A Tad Bit Fanatic chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
wow amazing wow!
HauntedPast chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
O! I freaked out when Leo came in! I was like how could he ruin such a perfect moment! Gr, Leo! I like this, is there a sequal?
DyingInnocence chapter 1 . 6/8/2007
It was a little too sappy at the end for my tastes but it's still an awesome story.
WonderSkeet chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
it was very good
CharmingAngelNL chapter 1 . 3/10/2006
Ahw man, Leo would never be that hostile...
Lenny chapter 1 . 9/27/2004
Aw! That was so cute. I've always thought Chris was gay ((course that could be because I have been reading too much Demian from TVwoP.)) And YES! You so bitched Leo. That was priceless. I loved it.
Priestess of Silvanus chapter 1 . 8/15/2004
to happiness
kopi chapter 1 . 7/19/2004
raven01uk chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
The story as a whole was powerful and moving, that I doubt anyone can dispute, however character reaction where slightly off, Piper although accepting was slightly to quick, I would imagine there would be a reasonable amount of questioning and confusion prior to the expected acceptance. As for Phoebe and Paiges behaviour, hit the nail on the head there. Leo had a somewhat drastic approach to the situation (me thinks you don't like him) and maybe that could be revised. What I want to make sure I get across is that this story is brilliant as it is however with minor adjustments perfection can be attained. Also what do you mean The End! This babies only just started! If however you do not wish to continue this may I have your permission to do so?
Dev chapter 1 . 3/20/2004
I don't have a problem w/ slash, but I still would have prefered this story (which is good by the way) if he had a girlfriend.
Sheiluchy chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
I second what Hokit said. Your story has to be the best Charmed fic I've read so far, all the other fics are so... childish I guess. And I think I may be the only person in the world who didn't like Cole...
Anyway, I also agree that Leo was kind of OOC but I don't really like him much anyway so I don't care that much. Great grammar, great spelling and isn't it nice to read a fic like that once in a while?
I hope you write more Charmed fics, a sequel to this one maybe?
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