|Reviews for Falling|
| b chapter 1 . 11/5/2005
Aw. exelent poem! wright on!
| vinnie the geek chapter 5 . 6/13/2005
I liked this one quite a bit. Possibly the best of the five here. Some very effective couplets, mixed in with some nice consonance. I know when I don't like one of mine, nothing can change my mind-so I won't try to change yours. But know that even at less than perfection, you can still create something that others may appreciate. Booyahs! Vin
| vinnie the geek chapter 4 . 6/13/2005
Aw-so sweet! Uh-sorry. I meant it was very nice. I mean good. Nice echo 'I'm gonna be...' 'We're gonna be...' Booyahs! Vin
| vinnie the geek chapter 2 . 6/13/2005
Hm... these wouldn't happen to be the thoughts of a certain furry green teen, would they? Hee hee. Very fresh. I love the way it trips along very lightly in the section 'You're not as cold... Isn't fooling me. Very pleasant meter and rhyme there. 3 Booyahs! Vin
| Hanita-chan chapter 5 . 2/9/2005
I don't usually dig the whole poetry scene, but this was pretty freaking cool. Tip'o the hat, my friend.
| hoshi-ko88 chapter 5 . 12/28/2004
Perty! We! BB&RAE FOREVER!
| Twin-Lupus too lazy to sign in lol chapter 5 . 7/20/2004
That was amazing! I loved it, and now I have warm fuzziness all over me hehe. Please update soon!
| Flying Star tltsi chapter 5 . 7/15/2004
I think it's fine just the way it is. Her expressing her feelings finally.
I loved it. Keep on writing. _
| Flying Star tltsi chapter 4 . 7/15/2004
I think it sounds enough like him. He's trying to stay optimistic admist everything.
I'm off to read the other chapter. _
PS. I did get your e-mail, mine's been acting up for awhile, and so I just got it now.
I'm gonna e-mail you back, but from a different address. The subject line will begin with: From Flying Star
Sorry about that, I did get it.
| Flying Star too lazy chapter 3 . 7/6/2004
Very sad, sounds like Robin to me. I'll read more when I can.
PS. To answer your question, it was Starfire. Did I surprise you?
| Flying Star too lazy chapter 2 . 6/22/2004
Definitely Beastboy. Loved it! So tender and deep.
I'll have to read more later since it's getting late.
PS. If you're interested I've written some more Teen Titan poems.
| Flying Star always too lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Very nice, I'm assuming that's Raven talking. The sad loneliness that she must endure. *weeps*
I'm off to read the next part. _
| Amber Skye chapter 1 . 5/4/2004
Very nice. I especially like the last two lines.
| Fireruby chapter 5 . 5/2/2004
Falling. Reaching. Saving. Loving. Fallen. (Not the best of symbolism, but, hey, I never said I was good like you are. ) But... this was truly a beautiful series of poems, featuring my one of my favorites of favorite couplings. n_n
The only possible negative thing I could say about this wonderful set of POVs was that Chapter 4 sounded very, very... deep for Beast Boy. But, then again, he could be like that when in his inner thoughts. We don't know. XD We probably don't give him enough credit, anyway.
But, anyway, it was a very minor thing. The poems are touching and deep. I loved it.
| audi katia chapter 5 . 5/2/2004
DON'T CHANGE IT! It's perfect in every way. Can I print this out and tape it to my agenda? I love it! Can I print out the first one, too? Don't worry. I'd tell people they're yours. :) Anyhoo, this was beautiful. You could seriously become a proffesional writer with these poems alone. They are that good!
A rose for you...