Reviews for The Elven Princess 2nd try!
Hug-a-Muffin chapter 1 . 10/22/2004
Nice revising!

Liz grl!

The first one wasn't bad though

and the same song from that one applies now

(insert song)

Kikiyo's Killer
Inaelathenna chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
This doesn't. Make any. SENSE.
Ultimate Warrior chapter 1 . 3/5/2004
So you don't mind if I flame you at one time or other? not that I would.
the Rhyming is certainly better in this version, some parts still go wierd but then Tolkiens poems go wierd in the rhyming and so do mine (not that I'm comparing my work to Tolkiens, his is obviously better).
if you do make a storie, story, I don't know why but I've been wanting to writd Story with an ie instead of a y, anyway if you write it as a story I will try an read it (if my sisters let me on the computer)
so better this time and it actually apealed to me as a poem...and now my sign off,
Forever at your service,
the Ultimate Warrior