Reviews for The Will of Naraku
AiydanWarrior chapter 8 . 11/7/2007
hey why does akane have to die? why can't hobo die or may-be shampoo.
sangi chapter 14 . 12/5/2004
I love it! But dont stop writing!
NovemberMist chapter 14 . 8/12/2004
- that's a really good fic! You should update. soon. yes...
Guest chapter 14 . 8/12/2004
i really like this fic i know you havent updated it almmost two months, but you really sould soon cause ill hunt ya down if you dont update this fic, SHIINA. well ya, JE NA (-)
All The Aspects chapter 14 . 7/17/2004
THIS RULES!

PLEASE CONTINUE!

Yume Keki
Ketsueki no Ko chapter 14 . 7/16/2004
...*thinks and gasps* It..can't be..Why you are a genius..no one would guess it to be that!But as Suichi Kudo says "The clues are many and suspects about, but with a keen eye for details on truth will prevail!" so maybe someone else has it figured out as well. ;)

Tori
sesshygirl3 chapter 14 . 7/12/2004
this is a really REALLY good story! the plot is excellent i just don't like the pairings, oh well this story is now on my favs list i cant wait to find out who the murderer is! i hope i fnd out soon the suspense is killimg me! i think you should change the genere to mystery/romance/humor cuz that suits this story much better. plz update soon!

sesshygirl
sesshygirl3 chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
excellent chapter you have a very good plot! kep it up!
Ayashii-Tsumi chapter 14 . 6/28/2004
i love it okay. it good i like how it mixes with a bunch of shows and stories and movies and books. my favorite art was in chapter 7 the last part with the ghostbusters. lol. anyways update soon okay. ja ne.
Carlee chapter 9 . 6/26/2004
please don't do cliff-hangers!I love your story so far! It's like 'Clue' Inu-Yasha style!
LuClipse85 chapter 14 . 6/26/2004
AIYA!(no clue what that means, I just hear it on Jackie Chan Adventures a lot) I CANNA STAND THE SUSPENSE!

That was a good chapter, I could've sworn Miroku actually was looking at porn! To me, he's an H but he's not that type of H! I'm really REALLY lookin' forward to seeing the next chapter! At the moment, I'm trying to kill time until midnight so I can watch InuYasha!
no one special chapter 14 . 6/26/2004
Oh! I think it might be Shampoo, or Shampoo and Houjo in it together. Shampoo had gloves with her, so no finger prints would be on the gun . . . But I could be wrong. Anyway, that's my guess, and my OPINION is that this story is awesome!
LuClipse85 chapter 13 . 6/23/2004
Oh yeah! End a good "Maison Ikkoku"-like drama with a cliffhanger! You were doing excellent with the romance-turns-into-drama storyline! I hope you get back into your writing mood and continue!
LuClipse85 chapter 12 . 6/23/2004
That was a good chapter! Sesshomaru's actually acting like a woman! That's funny! Too bad there's only one chapter left. Who knows how long it'll be before it's updated!

UPDATE o kudasai yo! UPDATE ni naritai yo!

Give me an update please! I want an update!
LuClipse85 chapter 11 . 6/23/2004
Boy, Sesshomaru just can't get a break, can he?

That whole little-brother-acts-like-a-pain-in-the-ass thing was funny! Then InuYasha has the nerve to get Koga involved!

It's obvious! I understand everything now! I know who the murderer is!

Sesshomaru: Really?

Koga: Who is it?

The sick bastard's doing this so he can have all the goods to himself! THE BUTLER DID IT!

Everyone: teardropped and crashes anime style.

InuYasha (sarcastically): Oh yeah, a real genius.

Kagura: Where's Great Detective Conan when you need him?
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