|Reviews for Broken Dreams|
| madnessdownunder2 chapter 5 . 1/30
| Pepper-up Pomfrey chapter 2 . 1/28
Really really really really good!
| Guest chapter 5 . 12/29/2013
| missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 11/9/2013
Wow. That was a hard story to read. One question: Why aren't the Dursleys in jail? Vernon needs to be gone forever, and Petunia still deserves some punishment ... as does the Dud.
Harry's fragile state and slow recovery do seem more realistic than stories that tend to have him up and playing Quidditch the day after being found beaten to within an inch of his life and sporting numerous broken bones, a concussion, skull fracture, beating welts, and various injuries to his internal organs ... all healed instantly, thanks to a dose of Skele-gro and some bruise paste.
I should think that, hovering so near death as he had been for many days, his magical core might have been nearly extinguished. In fact, I don't know why Dumbledore wouldn't consider this an ongoing problem that would trump the blood wards. After all, what good is an unspoiled hero if he is dead ... or so battered and abused that he has lost his magic?
| PiptheSnake chapter 5 . 10/29/2013
Yay! Happy ending!
| CupCakeyyy chapter 5 . 10/9/2013
Loved it! Absolutely loved it!
| Allie Danger chapter 5 . 9/21/2013
Oh freaking hell!
you dont know how many times I was THIS close to cry!
what a wonderful story..
jajajaja It would have been hilarious if you in the end just put "... and they live happily ever after" jajajaj
you rock! I'll read all of your stories
| Allie Danger chapter 4 . 9/21/2013
Oh Merlin.. my heart was so ready to jump out of my body!
How cute was this chapter
| Allie Danger chapter 3 . 9/21/2013
I wonder how this Harry is now..
/: How would Hermione and Ron react at seeing Harry that thin?
| Allie Danger chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
Oh God! thank you!
My stomach was a mess in this chapter... uff..
I love fanfics with abused Harry, but the feeling is not so great xD
| Allie Danger chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
Im so nervous.. !
what can possibly happen for harry not to send letters?
ok.. starving him to death is one reason.. but... something's bad going to happen!
oh Dear Merlin!
| The Devil's Burning Rose chapter 4 . 9/15/2013
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| Mackenzied3333 chapter 5 . 8/22/2013
| Fie chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Pleas make a wall between sub notes and story tex thanks
| Rainbow185 chapter 5 . 5/28/2013
That was great, I love how you showed the characters accurately :D