|Reviews for Blood, Flesh, and Mortality|
| chelsey chapter 3 . 5/6/2006
i like your story, u have ta update soon. soory i'm on a sugar high anyway i think i read a book like this but a lot different. i hope ya update soon.
| goliath184 chapter 3 . 12/30/2005
good story so far looking forward to the next chappie. update soon
| fearlessreverie chapter 3 . 12/30/2005
haha sorry i never knew you got flamed and i read some of the other reviews referring to it...im sory but that was jsut really freakin hilarious..sweet. no but anyways aww that was really nice of you to think of me and email me with your update i felt special...and i cant deny that i am starting to agree with you that all these monotinous stories are getting on my nerves with them all being the same but i think you do have a unique writing style that has gotten better in the long time away. also the story plot of this one seems to have changed a little bit or i didn't pick up on some of the points...becasue i did nt realize that vegeta and raven were vamps..i thought they were saying she was one...o well sorry i really am rambling here but im glad your back!
| DkAngel449 chapter 3 . 12/29/2005
omg! I love it! I love how you made Vegeta a vampire and Bulma a werewolf most of all because I love that sort of fiction and my favorite people in Dragonball Z are Vegeta and Bulma! I'm an expert on them! Well keep up the great work!
| DkAngel449 chapter 2 . 9/4/2005
I loved the storie! It was great! I like how you added Vampires and Wherewolves in it! There my favorite mythical creature! ((sorry if I spelled something wrong))
| Vampireguardian chapter 2 . 7/13/2005
I am really sorry about this long wait. I sorta wanted to just stop writing my story because I thought it crap but I dont think it is anymore but you will have to wait until august 16th or so because I am on vacation therefore i dont have my next chapter to upload or I would. Rather than writing this.
| kid waiting for story chapter 1 . 3/17/2005
DUDE did you die or something?
my apologies if it is something like that but its almost been a year since you last updated your story and that kinda suspense is killing me man...i even read the book that you got your inspiration from while waiting for the next chapter to come out...so please please please update soon!
| lazychic101 chapter 2 . 6/11/2004
getting chapters out faster is a good idea so you should do it...right now
| NASCARGURL2436 chapter 1 . 6/1/2004
Ok where do you get off saying something like that. If you don't like it what is your name... .? What the hell kind of name is that. That isn't even a fucking name. I think this is one of the worst names there are well next to that Oh god bitch. You guys would be great friends. LOL. Anyways if you don't like the story then fine don't read it. We aren't putting a gun to your fucking head and making you read. Do you have any stories you written and show off. Probably not since you didn't even leave your name so back off. You don't even know a good story if it bite you in your little pussy ass. Get a life and back the hell off bitch and until you can leave your name don't be flamin people. Here is my description of you... BITCH. Wow I did a great job. LOL.
| Venus Legacy chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
Your "name" really epitomises your whole character very well.
Who do you think you are Flamin someone who puts their work up on You creatures really try so hard to bring down someones spirit and soul just to make your selves feel better well guess what it's not gonna happen!
If Flamin is a hobby that satisfies you then like i say to all flamers i pity you i pity all of you for the fact that like leeches you get your kicks off of sucking the inspiration out of authors.
You knew that what you said was immoral which is why you did not have the courage to leave your real name and e-mail adress.
If you really respected and supported what you said you would have stuck by it by leavin your name.
But no you had to be like the rest of the small minority of leeches that infest by verbally abusing someone whom you've never met.
I pity you i really do
| Venus Legacy chapter 2 . 5/31/2004
Hey Da bomb23 i've read your story and found it very unique, stories with themes of the occult really intrigue me especially Vampiric stories.
However i couldn't really grasp the friendship between Raven and Bulma as when Bulma is introduced into the story Raven seems quite distant from her as the first thing she says to her is:
“Bulma why are you on the highway?
| Usako chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
This is to :
Come on now, if you're going to give an opinion, even if it's a negative one, at least sound somewhat intelligent. I mean, if you're actually trying to make a difference by being rude, you want the person you're trying to insult to be a little intimidated.
"Sorry to say but this story bites ok.
its too much like the book and when you try to descirb things you just make it sound stupid
Not only can you not spell, you give an idiotic excuse as to why it so-called "bites." It's only two chapters so far, you can't instantly say it's too much like another piece of writing. Say, 10 chapters in and it's too similar, then you're justified. But maybe, just maybe, you should have some patience and see how everything turns out. Everyone has a different way of writing, and to say anything "sucks" is plain rude. YOU write something and let other people judge it. It's not so easy! It takes courage to do that, and to outright put someone down is wrong and ignorant.
Learn how to spell and to read, since the fucking disclaimer explained everything beforehand. I suggest "Hooked on Phonics," I've heard it does wonders for grade school kids, seeing as that's what you are with a comment like that.
| Jurion chapter 1 . 5/31/2004
here is a list of reasons why is a sad, sad place.
1) Flamers with nothing constructive to say. Take "" for instance. This person probably prances around , looking for authors to downsize when their fics really aren't that bad. He/she proably wrote that comment while smiling evilly in his/her chair with a pop-tart between their legs and a porn mag next to them cause they aren't loved.
2)Beyond the fact that this assholes comment was useless and made no sense is the fact that he/she didn't even TRY to say what was wrong or why with the fic. Instead, they just basically wrote it off with some fuck-head comment that anyone with have a mind could have done.
So dude, try visiting this site next time you get an itch in your pimply white ass to flame randomly and uselessly. It'll help you in the long run, trust me.
p.s. thats my real email address, ass. I dont hide behind my computer. Feel free to send your thoughts.
| asherleve chapter 2 . 5/31/2004
I would like to direct this review to
First of all, ANYONE who leaves their name as '' is really corny...or just plain stupid.(Personally I prefere both)
And I just don't understand how anyone in the right mind say that somethings sounds 'stupid', when they're the one that spelled 'describe' as 'descirb'
My advice to you is that you take a break from all these supposedly 'flames', and when you get a brain and learn how to spell, you can tell us about it.
And to Po, this is actually a really good story!Please continue writing!
| Amyante chapter 2 . 5/31/2004
Heh, good fic so far :) A little confusing at the beginning whether Raven or Bulma was doing something, but nothing to worry about since you'll get the hang of it after a few chapters anyway _ Besides, i never read the book you got your inspiration from either... Just keep writing and it'll all work out just fine :P
Also, i noticed a kind of pattern: Most (if not all) flames like ""'s seem to have a few things in common:
1. They're Anonymous - go figure ;)
2. The 'reviews' seem to be based on the first 5 lines, if not less. (Hence why they always use Chapter 1)
3. The email address is always a false one. (Scared someone might answer hmm?)
However, i need to say something else about your review though...
"Sorry to say but this story bites ok.
its too much like the book and when you try to descirb things you just make it sound stupid"
See, you started out more or less okay. You actually tried to say why you thought it sucked. It wasn't successful, but at least it was something.
...And then you go and type something like that