Reviews for Crimson Tears
Aqua468 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
That was sooo sad. I thought you killed yugi! Eather way, great story!
Inuyashiisawesome chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
WOW. I feel so SORRY FOR YUGI. I actually Cried when i READ the story. GOOD WRITING SKILLS. Hope you write more fanfic's like this.
yumeyuki chapter 1 . 1/21/2009
this is too bad!

poor yugi was hurt so much...

so sad and sympathy to him...

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hA-UkA chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
I really thought it improved the story with you adding a police report to the end, but if that is his twin brother were is Yugi during the entire thing?
Corkboard chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Brilliant story... Absolutely brilliant...
CosmicEssence chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
Very nice. You had me confused there for awhile as I thought you'd killed Yugi, but going over your fic I can now see the cleverly placed parts that make it not so. I mean you've been calling him Yugi right up until that bit right before the boy gets shot..really it be a dead giveaway but it wasn't. Really well narrated but was Yugi still in the corner of that room then where his twin was killed and the man simply missed that little fact?

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kingleby chapter 1 . 3/28/2006
i love this view of his childhood. poor yugi.
Ryou Malik Luvers chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
*crying*

I-...I...r-...r-really...l-...l-liked...it...
Cheeky-eyes chapter 1 . 1/1/2006
aw that was so sad! gr8 fic!
Go-ruden Kiba chapter 1 . 10/30/2005
wow, that's really powerfull, but a little confuseing as to what son you are talking about. good job though!
tati1 chapter 1 . 3/28/2005
Very good. Very sobering. I'd write more, but I have to get offline soon...

Keep writing; you're quite good at it.
Chocoholixx chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
Wow, that was a good twist. I thought Yuugi had been killed instead it was his twin brother. Really good story.
admit-let-me-delete-my-account chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
OMG... OMG! That's so damn amazin'! I've never read, (or maybe I have, I read a lot) something ao beautifully written...
FekketCantenel chapter 1 . 4/7/2004
*mouth hanging open* Wow.
Fiona: You're too easy to please. Eh, it's a great story-
Me: Great? GREAT? IT'S AWESOME!
Fiona: Didn't you think the part at the end with the 'twins' thing was a bit confusing?
Me: Is Sugoroku Yugi's paternal or maternal grandfather? I'm wondering wether his mom or dad looked like him, that's all. And resourceful little Yugi-chan, able to get a first-aid kit for himself
Fiona: If only Yami had been there, that guy would have gotten the shit beat out of him.
Me: Fic idea! *goes to write some random crap that will probably never be finished*
Fiona: *sigh* Great story! Very good prose. I give it 4 1/2 out of 5 stars! Bye!
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