From what I have seen, I really dislike the way Batman treats Cassandra and this story illustrates rather well how.

Really like how you portrayed her and how you wrote Alfred. Thank you for sharing this.

Oh my goodness! I've found a goldmine in the shape of your writing.

Hi, it's me again. Yes, I'm totally stalking your fics *L* I hope I'm not being annoying but I just really want to show my appreciation for these awesome, awesome fics. This is 3 for 3 that I've loved. Cass' understanding of New Years and the "man with the strange face" (bwah!) are gold.

Some authors mistake a quantity as being better; more isn't always better, it's just... more. Being able to communicate WELL with brevity, yet doing justice to the narrative/story, THAT is one of the hallmarks of good writing-you've got it in spades!

I wish you would write more! You are too gifted to let it waste, unused.

Get Inspired and WRITE MORE!

very good take on the cassandra character... true i've not read any batgirl comics and i'm starting to think i should start after reading a few really good fanfictions.

Cute. I like the portrayal of Cass in this, and the comparisons they make. Lovely.

Very nice. Loved the nice, dark background for Alfred. We rarely get to see him outside the manor but he did have his own life.

Oh, lovely! I like the view of Alfred's past, and it really works that these two understand each other so well.

Lovely - Alfred and Cass, two of my favorite characters caught in a simply wonderful moment.
Love the conversation, and the insight into Alfred's past. Using Cass as a method of telling both their stories is so impressive...your talent shines here.
And a reference to poor Dorian...! Gotta love that.

This deserves ten thousand more reviews.
I loved it. I, too, am often inspired to write Batman when reading about war, and what you did here was awesome. I don't think I saw a single mistake. So refreshing, and it really draws you in. Not to mention sweet. Please write more!
*adds you to Author Alert*

I really liked this, it was pretty cute, and it's nice to see Cassandra relating to someone like this, Alfred as well. Most of the time he's only seen as a background character, the butler, and finally we have more background story in a fan fic.

Very nicely done!

This is fantastic! You've got the dialogue perfect and the characters are completely in character. This works so well, I can't believe this is your first posting here. Hope it's not your last. Oh, and great reference to the Picture of Dorian Grey, oops! I mean Dick Clark.

Outstanding story.
Hope to read more from you.