|Reviews for Return to Innocence|
| Slightly Sinister Sinestra chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
OMG, that was so beautiful! I loved it!
| Caorann fridh Bronach chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
Wow, I am impressed. Your wording sounds a lot like poetry and comes from the depths of the heart. It has a very personal feel to it with a lot of insight, like Kaiba being called for the one he hated, how Mokuba "can't" see the bad of Kaiba, Kaiba's character in general, and plenty more!
Excellent similes and metaphors-they seem to just flow naturally out of the story, especially the fire comparison.
Wow, I have nothing of advice to give you. I just really enjoyed this work. Great, great job.
| bohr-d chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
Beautiful. I really liked this- great insight on Seto. Keep up the great work- I think you have real talent! I look forward to reading some of your other fics in the future.
| Imetsu chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
A different perspective on things. Beautiful.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/31/2004
Poetic Mokuba. Pretty. I like the piece - it's short, but full of character assessment.
| Hikari chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Beautiful, very touching - great fic, I look forward for more from you
| reggaeshiko-tama chapter 1 . 3/17/2004
That was DEEP! Found while looking in your great journal account. You are so on my friend's list there and this story is going on my fave list at of course. Keep Writing! You have a real gift!
| XxDarkWitchXx chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
this was a good fic! Keep up the good work! -
| Mordeshake chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
I really liked this! I loved seeing the whole situation from Mokuba's point of view. Anyways, it was excellent and I loved it! Great job! .
| mike chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
I liked it, except parts of it disturb me and mess up my whole picture of Setoness
| GothicAngel09 chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
That was so good!Aww..(burst into tears)so good..so up the good work!
| Bloody Mary chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Aww. Love the way you pictured Kaiba. It's great!
| Meriah chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
Yay! You got up a new fic! ;
This is kawaii I still like your Ishtar fics more because I'm like, "THE ISHTARS! BJDFJBDFJ DFD :) :) :)" but this is excellent anyway.
| Garowyn chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
I like it. _
| Katah chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
Beautifully written, it works perfectly. Great observations and metaphors, this was incredibly good _