This is easily one of my favorite stories on . It's an excellent continuation of Invader Zim. Please continue to update this. Too many excellent writers have abandoned their stories.

GAH! NEED MORE!

Oh wow! This story is just incredible, and this chapter is no exception. The writing is supurb, uneque and compelling. The descriptions are so clear that I can see everything you describe, and the characters are realistic and likable. Dib is done extremely well, and Vic is my favorite oc that I have yet encountered.

I love this story, particularly the viewpoints of Dib and Vic, and more recently I am starting to love the little Irkens. You describe them all so well that I feel as though I know them already, and I deftinately don't blame you for only really describing five of them in depth. That's a lot of characters, and it makes sense the way you explained it in the story.

I think I know what happened to Vic, but I really want to see what will happen next, and where the story is going. Take all the time you need to update, but please never abandon this story. I've read it about 25 times and I'm still addicted. This is the best fan fiction I have ever read, and would make for one of the best novels as well, and thank you so much for sharing it.

Hey DT, great story! i really like how the cultural diffrences between Dib and Vic turned out.

Sees that the story have been on hold for quite some time though. Please, start writing again - or atleast make a note if you've stopped with it completely.

Oh my dear DT, I have been following this story since I was 14. I loved it so much that I once tried to host the audio version of it for you but alas my website couldn't handle it. (I still have the file for it around here somewhere though.)

Please don't leave myself and all your other fans in the lurch! We miss your wonderful writing style and sense of humor. Come back! '(

I am very much hoping you haven't lost your muse or your interest in this story entirely, as I among others very much eagerly await the next chapter. Chapter 21 is the "cliffest" of cliffhangers thus far, and even one more chapter that explains what's going on would be awesome.

And on a side note, I see so many similarities between this story and PIXAR's "Wall-E" that it's almost not funny. Just thought you should know.

-Colton

I just wrote a very long review. . . then my internet died and killed it. In short:

Your story is one of the best on it's really great. I encourage you to continue writing it until it is finished. Thank you for writing this fantastic piece.

This... really sucks.

Not the story, before you eat my face or something. The story is the best damn piece of fanfiction I ever had to luck of laying my eyes on, its the fact this god damn piece of awesome fanficion hasn't been updated for a year. I mean, hot damn, I REALLY wanna know what happens!

I mean, c'mon my man, help a girl out. This story is REALLY too good to stop with this cliffy.

I'll even through in some (shitty) fanart as a bribe. How does that sound?

LOL!

I've hinted hard enough. I love it so far, and I hope you do decide to continue. X3

I like, I like.

First off, amazing story. I stayed up until 6 in the morning reading it. I'm very impressed with how you turned a humor(morbid, maybe, but still humor) cartoon into such a serious world. And I love the insights into Irken history/culture.

I don't think the newest chapter was lacking in any way, but I respect the right of any artist or writer to be harsh on themselves.

Also, I've drawn you some fanart, I wasn't sure if I should email you or just link it here, hopefully this works:

http:(frontslash)(frontslash) .com(frontslashs)art(frontslash)Invader-Zim-Going-On-716568

Of the new Irken kids. Just a quick drawing, but I like the designs.

Dispite your AN sateing that this chap was rushed I LIKE this one. This is favorite IZ fic. I haven't reviewed before although I started reading quite a while ago. Anywho good work. Has this fic been abandoned? Cause it hasn't been updated in almost a year.

o.o im in awe! plz dont keep us waiting to long!

Holy. Friggin'. Hell.

Once I get out of my slump, you are getting MAJOR fanarts, just to let you know. (While I don't have the stamina to read something so introspective and mind-boggling in one sitting, I will admit that I spent pretty much all of my waking hour on this.) Words can't even describe how badlt I want to lick your boots in worship.

Thank you so much for gracing the Invader Zim fanverse with this... this... I can't think of praise worthy enough to describe this fanfic.

this is the first IZ fanfic i read, and let me tell you, i'm so impressed. i read it all in one sitting. i actually came here from the Why Me? fic, and i'm glad i checked out your list of stories. I like your long author's notes, how you take the time to explain things from your end, it lets the readers get to know and respect you. the songs you pick are perfect for the chapters and it shows how thoroughly you think about the themes of each one. your writing is always fantastic, even if you don't agree. i think it's the way you put together sentences that really shows your talent. they keep the eye moving. your grammer and vocabulary help this along too. i wish i had some sort of artistic talent so i could give you some fanart, cuz this fic has great moments. looking forward to the next update, whenever the muse allows.

It's so full of win that you're still updating. This has been and always will be my favourite piece of fanfiction, even if it's never finished. Well, I'd prefer it finished, but eh. xD; It's also the only fanfiction that's managed a fan character of sorts into the storyline and not totally pissed me off.

Mhm, well. Best of luck to finish the next chapter, I know I'll enjoy reading it like I always have.