|Reviews for Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle|
| The Wise Dragoness chapter 1 . 2/14
I would love to see this story come to completion. Or, at least, see Legolas and Rhinure's child.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/22
Probably for the best this wasn't continued. Legolas and Cothion's rivalry was poorly handled, you basically had to completely change the latter so as to force a positive outcome for the former. The end goals of Legolas and Cothion were not mutually exclusive and there's no reason that Rhinure would end up having to choose one or the other, she could maintain her tradition and duty to her people and still be a dutiful wife to her husband. If she can't see that, perhaps she isn't all she was cracked up to be. Also, Cothion getting so unhinged about his brother seemed completely contradictory to the stoic Avari you made him out to be. That in hindsight more than anything should've been where I realized things were going downhill for this fic. Long story short, character assassination is a cheap way to achieve a desired outcome, even more so if that outcome is achievable anyway through better means.
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/8
U r not continuing the story are you?
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/8
| ClaraThad chapter 12 . 11/5/2017
I have totally enjoyed this story. I am very sorry that it has not been completed. I can only hope that one day you manage to finish it the entire way.
| Priscila chapter 12 . 9/14/2017
I am reading this 8 years after the last update, a pity such master piece was discontinued. I really wish to know the rest.
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/28/2017
Hi! Came across your stories and wish to tell you I like it so much!Im sad to see that this story was not finished :( i was looking forward to what will happen now between them . And what about the ones that the problems of the avari? But whatever it is that happened that caused the story to stop unexpectedly, hope that you are doing well! Your story had kept me up all night reading! Wish i learned of this earlier. It has been years since I got hooked with someone's writing. Thank you for sharing your take on this :)
| Guest chapter 12 . 3/11/2017
can you write some more. the last last time you wevacuatedrote was a few years ago.i really enjoy these stories. it seems as if all of fanfiction net has been
| Silverwolf22002 chapter 12 . 12/30/2016
Yay! I just love your story! I need more! This, btw, is almost exactly the way I imagined a relationship with Legolas to be. Rough on both individuals, and yet soft at the same time. Beautiful in its own way. I also was certain that Legolas would never fall for some shy elfish maid, no matter how much he loves to toy with them. Anyway, thx soooo much for this wonderful fantasy brought to life on paper, well a screen, but paper none the less.
Greatest thanks, silverwolf22002
P.S. I can't wait to find out what happens in Gondor... ;)
| Shann chapter 12 . 7/24/2016
I feel like this is a grave and I can't stop visiting it. Moriquendi is probably dead and buried, but I will always be back here again and again... waiting. Maybe one day you'll come back and finish the story. Until then :)
| NOOOOOOO chapter 12 . 6/8/2016
No. No. Nono. Nonononono
Please someone tell me that this isn't real
An unfinished story this good?!
At this point I'd pretty much do anything for you if it's going to get you writing back to this!
You can NOT leave a masterpiece unfinished, you just CAN'T, PLEASEEE
| Tingilya chapter 12 . 5/17/2016
I love this story!
Im so unhappy because its not finished!
Your writing is so strong an lovely and I wish I could read more! 12 years... and I still hope for another chapter!
| Ishani chapter 12 . 3/6/2016
| Shann chapter 1 . 3/1/2016
f***. i would chop off a toe to see this story completed. it's unbelievable to me how i keep coming back to this after finding it 3 years ago. i guess that's just the power of your writing. i've had to stop myself from throwing all caution to the wind and finishing it myself, even though i know i could never do your work justice, because i'm simply aching for a conclusion for Legolas and Rhinure. of course, i would never do that. but AHHHHHHHhhhhfdhfghdgfh. this is incredible. it truly breaks my heart into so many pieces that it has been abandoned. it's a real loss. hope you are okay xxx
| Guest chapter 12 . 1/10/2016
I am not joking when I say this is one of THE BEST Legolas related fan fictions I have EVER read. If you ever consider finishing this story the whole fandom would thank you. It is a wonderful piece, intricate and so deliciously complex. Please, please, please, think about finishing it.