Reviews for Footsteps in Time |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() I never got to see it in IMAX. I was going to, but when we called tickets were sold out, for the rest of the time it was out! So I didn't get to go. I'll get over it don't worry. I can always make my mom drive me to a different city lol. I miss my old screen name, Celebrean, but I got it after I worked on my Brotherhood story. Celebrean is the girl Sirius likes and Celebrean likes him, or that's how it will be in future chapters...maybe years, since right now they're only in first. Hm...what year should they start liking each other. Anyway I might work on it now, I think my break has been way to long. Wish I didn't have school tommorow, then I owuldn't have to work on schoolwork too. I have a test tommorow too... I haven't talked about your story at all yet lol. Great job, nice and long. I like how Sirius sent back the gift. I hope James decides to trust Sirius. Know what I like about this story? It's not like those where everyone automaticly loves Sirius and wants to be his friend. In mine, most people ignore him besides the marauders. Anyway, keep up the good work, I have to try and update. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh this is just so great! i hope to read more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved that chapter! I really like how you showed another step in Sirius turning his back from his family this chapter. (hope u understand that) anyway i like how the change is gradually happening. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Sirius has a happy Christmas present! And it made him feel all warm and fuzzy inside, LOL. Ouch. I would not want to be the once around when his mum gets the package back... *shudders* LOL James' dad is O.K. with the friendship thing now? Cool. Please update soon, I loved the chapter! |
![]() ![]() it's not 'off' course! It's 'of'! |
![]() ![]() amasing, u hav got 2 contine, i wish u all the best 4 yr exams! |
![]() ![]() Good so far I can tell it's going to be a wonderful story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() THANK YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've read my fic on peter? Wow, that was a while ago, I don't quite remember whether you have or not, but you probably have. Yes, it has been a while since you updated, but I'm not complaining, I haven't updated in over a month... I had exams, too, and taht's partly why I haven't not to mention I'm traveling all winter break so I can't really write (I'm in an internet cafe.) But please continue, this is still one of my absolute favorite fics! Oh, just as a small editing note, the people aronud James gave a groan, not a grown. Sorry about being so nit-picky, but I'm grammar-perfect by nature, and I have a tendancy to bother others about it. You have very good grammar, making reading your story enjoyable! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sadly enough, because I find your story so believable, I'm starting to find all the hundreds of stories about James and Sirius growing up as best friends before Hogwarts more than a little unbelievable. You've corrupted me! ;D I love how things are developing, especially with Lily and Snape in the last half. And to think those rivalries will hang on for at least five years... I would only request that James' next prank (or Sirius', if you're involving him on the next one) be a bit more creative. But then, I guess that's about what one should expect from them as first years. Please update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can't believe I missed your last update! Stupid, stupid me! This chapter was great by the way, I'm glad to be seeing more of this story again. For some reason I haven't been able to get inspired for my story. No matter how many Marauder fics I read nothing pops in my head for my own story. Do you think I should put it on hold for a while? I DO have an oral I have to work on before school starts. Why do they have to give an assignment to do during Christmas break? No ones going to do it, everyone will do it the night before and get a bad grade! *Sighs* I know what I'm doing at least, so it shouldn't be that hard. Guess what? My mom said she'd buy me tickets to see POA in IMAX if I find a friend to go with! That will be hard, sicne most of my friends are busy this week, but I'll think of something! I hate Snape as a kid. He's bad when he grows up, but not AS bad since he actually is a little more fair...maybe...well he's a good guy as far as we know right? I have to make this very long, to count for two reviews lol. It's cold here...kinda...I dunno I'm out of topics. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() GREAT!But write the next one FAST. Just a suggestion, but why don't you get James'father involved more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, poor Sirius, but at least it is not as bad. Interesting way to have the Snape-James hate begin! Poor Jamesy, he was only trying to help a friend, LOL! I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very entertaining, and made me feel very bad for Snape. You write very well. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I really love this story. It's great to find something foccusing more on Sirius and James than the usual James and Lily. It's been an extremely boring Christmas break and it's stories like yours that keep me from goin insane so thanx for that! |