Reviews for Footsteps in Time |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just wanted to let you know that I have only just found your first story. Kept me up most of the night reading it. I think you did a great job. I look forward to starting on year two. (Unfortunately, RL dictates that that wait for at least a couple of hours. lol) Thanks for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() hoho ... yay! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hm ... poor sirius |
![]() ![]() ![]() i just finished, i spent ages looking for a story like this... im gonna read the second year now... thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! Now I'm going to continue with Year 2. Can't wait for more! LOVE IT! Definitely going into my favourites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! WOW THAT FELT GOOD ESPECIALLY AFTER READING THAT! ttfn Hilary |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow this is really good and i have only started reading! i have to take a break now but i will be back! TTFN! hilary |
![]() ![]() ![]() This seems like the once in a life time clissics so i think I'll save this to my faves so that I can finnish it later because I just started! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an amazing story - one of the best I've read this year! I was going to review at every chapter but soon I was so emerged that I just had to read more, and more, and more! Fantastic. I'll be moving on to the Second Year now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm, I wonder who Cory is? Well, the story is progessing, and it's not dragging on. I really like the quick, interesting pace of the story. I hope James does not take his grudge too far, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Erm, okay. It was really good, but I... I hate Frederick! What a stupid prick! Alright, just had to get that off my chest. He seems a little like Percy by the way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I thought you did a very good job showing how Sirius' childhood contrasted with James'. I knew that James was supposed to be a bit of a prat at Hogwarts, but I never read anything on it that gave me evidence, other than JK Rowlings' words. Reading this made me think about James' childhood and realize how easy he had it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really, really like your story! This chapter is very well written, and when I first read it, it drew me in immediately. I thought it was extremely realistic, and just overall, I commend you for being such a talented writer. Great job! Poor Sirius. So much memorizing and reciting... I love Sirius. He's my favorite character, if you can't tell already. On to the next chapter! |