Reviews for The Waitress and her Samurai
One Wing Writer chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
OK let me get started
1: spellcheck: now I know that it won't help with the japanese words but those little grammer and spelling mistakes would have been taken care of
2:It may be just me but I think that you use a little too many plot line for such a sort.I me you got that whole cannon girl thing, the thugs, and that nightmare that Tsubame had. all these thing alone would have be a story.
well now that that over now its time to tell you what I liked
1: Kiwaii _ I mean this story is really cute although it would have been cuter if Tsubame called Yahiko Yahiko-chan, but I'm a purest
2: Its a Yahiko and Tsubame fic that in it self should get you sometime for trying something new
3: After reading this fic you gave I good idea to use in my story so arigatou gozaimuse
well I hope you write more Y/T Cya L8er
Sedoh Kyo chapter 1 . 3/4/2004
neva read a yahiko tsubame ff
it was good.
FF-KH-AnimeFREAK chapter 1 . 3/3/2004
No one shot fic! Continue or I'll use my Keyblade on you! This was SO adorable! I love it! Another great fic from my main man StoryWeaver lol. So cute *_~* Please continue, I wanna see more YT fics! This one started off great! Btw- I think Arigouto is spelled Arigato _ Least thats how I spell it LOL.
LadyWaterShaman chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
The evil witch chapter 1 . 3/2/2004
Hey that was a really nice fic!Keep up the good work!
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