Reviews for Rebellion |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey Miffy! Whip me up a chicken-bacon sandwich too?Thanx! |
![]() ![]() I believe in Snape-bob |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG LOL I WAS LITERALLY LISTENING TO THAT VERY SONG AT THE BEGINING OF THIS CHAPTER XD |
![]() ![]() I swear im crying. this was so hilarious. i cant. i read too fast. this is brilliant. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ron didn’t kiss Hermione |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Snape entered Harry's mind quickly and left just as quickly, having seen Voldemort and Umbridge in the same bed with the sheets pulled up.” That would traumatize anyone |
![]() ![]() ![]() 'Red herring' was priceless. 'Shows what you know' had me snorting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haven't laughed that hard in a while. The dog's looking at me like I'm nuts. |
![]() ![]() You use the word “said” too much in dialogue. |
![]() ![]() You switch a little between POVs sometimes. It’s confusing. |
![]() ![]() NO DONT MAKE HARRY STOP THE REBELLION |
![]() ![]() DAMN, this is hilarious! |
![]() ![]() Please have more Voldemort-Snape interactions! |
![]() ![]() The professors are reacting too mildly they should have snapped took points issued detentions or tried to expel Harry |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lot of folks have tried to do "insane prankster harry" and a lot of them just manage "silly prankster harry" but I think that you have managed 5he first without going too far into the second. Great fun! kudos! |