Reviews for Taking life in your own hands
missgsmith51 chapter 5 . 5/14
This is a bittersweet story. I hope the three bruised and battered people are able to truly become a real family. It seems a lot of negative ideas from the Dursleys must have been pretty deeply ingrained in Harry's subconscious, even at the tender age of five. I hope Severus and Minerva are able to drive them away before long. The fact that Harry was willing to take such a drastic step shows how deeply the abuse and manipulations he has suffered over the years have damaged him. The fact that he chose this option rather than suicide, however, is a positive sign, as it tells us he truly believes a happy life is possible. Fortunately, his actions have provided a second chance at happiness for all three of them - with parents for Harry and a child (maybe even more) for Severus and Minerva. We can only hope they grab it.

It's too bad they all didn't check into Harry's properties before they began to take the steps they all took. They might have been able to move to Australia, France, Italy, or the US, far away from the shadows of Dumbledore and Hogwarts. I suppose it may take Dumbledore's death to allow them to truly relax. I hope they survive and thrive.
Pathseekerme chapter 5 . 4/26
This is an AWESOME story, and you are a TERRIFIC writer! Your characters seem so REAL and their interactions make them seem even more so! And you definitely have a gift for writing descriptions; there were many times that it seemed as if I was just watching a movie in my mind's eye rather than reading a story online. I am so impressed with the amount of imagery you put in this story and how well you were able to make everything seem so vivid and even to convey feelings! Thank you for writing this story; I just wanted you to know how wonderful I thought it was. I have "Favorited and Followed" both you and your story. Thanks again!
Delete-account-please-8018839 chapter 5 . 7/2/2016
Ok got say this was great and I hope you will update soon cause I can't wait to read more here.
marthapreston4 chapter 1 . 4/5/2015
Love the concept my only question is isnt minnie and sev like 40 years apart she is old enough to sev's mom
My Alternate Reality chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
Aww this was cute. I hope you come back to it!
Silene-Ashikawa chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
OMG, this is a time when t should become more fluffier! Please continueee
Espied7 chapter 5 . 3/28/2012
Interesting idea, but I can't stand the idea of that potion. It's basically suicide, erasing everything that makes you, you, and I find it a bit disturbing that they just go along with it like it's nothing...
Animagin chapter 5 . 2/21/2012
It's pretty obvious that this won't change a thing, because - let's face it - this story hasn't been updated in nearly 5 jears... but anyway...

The story is great and i woult love to read how it all ends!
beauty0102 chapter 5 . 6/27/2011
I hope you coutine to update this story too.
Cassandra30 chapter 5 . 6/9/2011
Most excellent chapter!
MeinGimli chapter 5 . 1/29/2011
nice idea u should have finished it
reader1writer1 chapter 5 . 1/6/2011
I enjoyed this story. I hope you get back to it one day :)
MAHA1959 chapter 5 . 12/22/2010
hello ! sorry for my english, but i'm french. i've just read that story. the first three in french tranlation and the last 2 in english. and i wonder if you will gon on this fic ? i will like to know what it happens in the magical world during the new life of Harry/Daniel. about Dumbledore, the Weasley, Hermione, Lupin ... and so on. and what happens when Harry was 11. thanks for your response. to read you...
Neeshack chapter 5 . 2/28/2010
Intriguing story. Looking forward to see where it goes.
TheologyDiscography chapter 5 . 11/22/2009
Beautiful. I adore this story. It's wonderful. I can't wait for more.
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