|Reviews for The Infinity Project|
| MisterChief chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Okay, where to begin?
First off, this story suffers from a lot of grammatical and spelling errors. You have to fix that.
Secondly, your writing style and dialogue aren't that great. I was totally confused at points about what was going on in your story. I can't give you any advice here - how do you tell someone how to write better - but I suggest you check out Fox the Cave II - there's a guy who knows how to write.
Thirdly, the ending was a total cop-out. Again, I didn't totally understand it, particularly James' reaction to what he sees on the TV. That, and you left way too much up in the air. If those question marks at the end are indicative and you write a sequel, then maybe it will make sense - but based on how long it's been since you updated, I guess not.
Overall: Poorly written, up to the point where it's incomprehensible. Needs a lot of work to become respectable.
| Lone Wolfs Darkness chapter 1 . 5/25/2005
This Story was really good it rocks my socks
| amazing platypus chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
DUDE DIS STORY RCKS. Sequeal?
| WoLfBoY538 chapter 1 . 8/6/2004
WOW! this story Rocks! i love your writing please write the sequel!