Reviews for Why She Kept Her Head Down
xXxMarcelitaxXx chapter 2 . 4/13
I love how you used bub , I thought I was the only one that see that.
Gericathewolf chapter 20 . 11/22/2014
This was. A really good story. Although I would have to say that there is a few things that I think you could fix it. But other than that it was great! Keep writeing
Kakashi911 chapter 5 . 6/20/2014
This story is to his for such short chapters and your put ins at the end are hella long and annoying.
Bloody White Roses chapter 20 . 2/22/2014
Really enjoyed your story ! I wore a hoodie almost everyday at school so this just related to me . The insults you used in this became my counter attacks to the everyday insults . I think that this may be one of the most realistic stories I've ever read . Thanks for everything .
-BWR
kakkn chapter 20 . 2/17/2014
I thought it was a great story and was impressed that you had kagome get training to fight for her family instead of having inuyasha handle it. :)
InuYasha-Twilugh chapter 20 . 1/23/2014
That story was amazing! I loved it. Besides the short chappies it was AWESOME!
mynameispaco103 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Hi! :3 I loves the story I really do it just like a couple things that kinda bother me like early in the story when kagome starts beating up kikyo it say kagome already knew some karate but later she had to learn kick boxing but if she already knew karate? And I felt like inuyasha was kinda weak in the story when kagome disappeared they were really chill about it but other then that I loved the story :D!
14 inu-kag chapter 20 . 1/26/2012
this was so cuuteee i loved it but i wished you put a lemon for inuyasha and kagome lol...but seriously you did a fanrastic job on this story i loved the ending! keep up the good work!
written.fiction.addiction chapter 19 . 9/13/2010
Okay, so this chapter was essentially copy/paste from Enough. I mean word for word. "You're down, he thinks he's won. And as sure as he's a coward he will try to kick you." It’s a direct quote, and except for the stuff with Naraku, the whole situations the exact same. I don’t want to flame, but it’s hard to have respect for a writer who doesn’t even change the wording and pretend they came up with the situation.
Shortsh1t chapter 20 . 5/22/2010
It was a very good story I really enjoyed it
kags chapter 20 . 5/17/2010
it...it...i...it...it...was...was...j...just...s...so...so...t...to...TOUCHING! OHHH I LOVED IT!
inureader chapter 20 . 3/20/2010
That was an awesome story! I laughed, i cried, i felt like rripping someones head off(just kiding). I loved the ending, "because of my big..." lol.
XxInume-TakahashixX chapter 20 . 12/13/2009
Okay as much as I would like to say i loved this story I really didn't. No I'm not flaming. I'm just stating that because of the story eing so confusing I couldn't into it as I wanted to.. Sure I liked it, becuz if I didn't I wouldn't read it or review I just want to point out a few things to see if you can clear it up for me.

Kagome's mom: Okay her character really to me served no purpoe at all in this story. I didn't get her motive at all and tell the truth i think she ould have been better off dead.

InuYasha: Again I kinda get why he was here but he only helped with falling for her, not uch of the troubles in her life. Well yeah he made her want to defeat those bastard but he relly didn't do anything to actuall help. And If he's a half-demon, why didn't he just sniff out Kagomem's location in the begiinning. Also if he was so possesive why didn't he freak hen Kagome was kidnapped. I'm pretty sure a random call would stop an Inu-hanyou from finding his intended.

Sango: Okay why was she so crazy? Sure it was funny but sometimes she was just bleh

Miroku:...no comment

Rin: why was she and Sesshomaru even there?

Ayame and Kouga: Same

Really though i feel like you tried to do too much at once

Kagome: Her character was just confusing to me

Again though this is NOT a flame!

Im just totally lost

Inume
XxInume-TakahashixX chapter 19 . 12/13/2009
LOL LOL was trhis chapter totaly related to ENOUGH or what? lol
BSlove chapter 20 . 10/18/2009
Good story, i enjoyed it a lot. though i think i have read before, or maybe something similar to the plot. Well Keep up the good work, Tootles
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