|Reviews for Why She Kept Her Head Down|
| thedemonKZslayer chapter 20 . 9/19
there wasn't details about some important stuff
and it wasn't 100% with the characters
BUT it is an awesome story
AND I WANT TO POINT OUT THAT
NARAKUS FATHER DOESN'T HAVE A NAME
| KinkieKittie69 chapter 2 . 9/13
i like it so far. it dose peek my interest. if i find a chapter to make me squeel like the obsessed fan girl/boy i am . i shall review
| RavenNM chapter 19 . 7/9
This whole scene is from that Jennifer Lopes movie, "Enough"
| xXxMarcelitaxXx chapter 2 . 4/13
I love how you used bub , I thought I was the only one that see that.
| Sasha Braus The Wolf chapter 20 . 11/22/2014
This was. A really good story. Although I would have to say that there is a few things that I think you could fix it. But other than that it was great! Keep writeing
| Kakashi911 chapter 5 . 6/20/2014
This story is to his for such short chapters and your put ins at the end are hella long and annoying.
| Bloody White Roses chapter 20 . 2/22/2014
Really enjoyed your story ! I wore a hoodie almost everyday at school so this just related to me . The insults you used in this became my counter attacks to the everyday insults . I think that this may be one of the most realistic stories I've ever read . Thanks for everything .
| kakkn chapter 20 . 2/17/2014
I thought it was a great story and was impressed that you had kagome get training to fight for her family instead of having inuyasha handle it. :)
| InuYasha-Twilugh chapter 20 . 1/23/2014
That story was amazing! I loved it. Besides the short chappies it was AWESOME!
| mynameispaco103 chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
Hi! :3 I loves the story I really do it just like a couple things that kinda bother me like early in the story when kagome starts beating up kikyo it say kagome already knew some karate but later she had to learn kick boxing but if she already knew karate? And I felt like inuyasha was kinda weak in the story when kagome disappeared they were really chill about it but other then that I loved the story :D!
| 14 inu-kag chapter 20 . 1/26/2012
this was so cuuteee i loved it but i wished you put a lemon for inuyasha and kagome lol...but seriously you did a fanrastic job on this story i loved the ending! keep up the good work!
| written.fiction.addiction chapter 19 . 9/13/2010
Okay, so this chapter was essentially copy/paste from Enough. I mean word for word. "You're down, he thinks he's won. And as sure as he's a coward he will try to kick you." It’s a direct quote, and except for the stuff with Naraku, the whole situations the exact same. I don’t want to flame, but it’s hard to have respect for a writer who doesn’t even change the wording and pretend they came up with the situation.
| Shortsh1t chapter 20 . 5/22/2010
It was a very good story I really enjoyed it
| kags chapter 20 . 5/17/2010
it...it...i...it...it...was...was...j...just...s...so...so...t...to...TOUCHING! OHHH I LOVED IT!
| inureader chapter 20 . 3/20/2010
That was an awesome story! I laughed, i cried, i felt like rripping someones head off(just kiding). I loved the ending, "because of my big..." lol.