|Reviews for The Sun Always Rises|
| ViolaHarmony chapter 18 . 2/20
This entire story is achingly beautiful. And while it may sound strange, it feels very authentic to the Mario universe. Granted, something this apocalyptic would never happen in actual canon. But if it DID, well, I think you present a very believable picture of what a post-apocalyptic Mushroom world would be like. I loved that Luigi was the one to find Mario and convince him to be a hero again! But now Luigi is struggling... :'( Luigi's behavior is very understandable, but it still hurts my heart to see the Mario bros so at odds with each other. Of course Mario needs to be there for Peach, but he needs to be there for Luigi, too! I just hope he can reach him before it's too late...
So, I know you're not going to finish this story, but...
PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! *sobs* It's okay if it's old. Heck, it's okay if YOU'RE old. I'm old, too! You just have to tell us what happens! This story is too beautiful to die! And I know I have no right to be begging this of you when I myself haven't posted anything since 2014, but I was never really that good anyway! You are! *sniff* Okay, I've said my peace. I'll leave you alone now. I'll just be in my corner, with my jar of Nutella, mourning the death of this story.
| Renard bleu chapter 18 . 1/23/2017
I know this story took you really big time, but...
It's so freaking awesome!
I search for a story like that for long!
A broken Luigi, a nom more princess and a Mario who need Luigi to be Mario again!
Gosh, I think I will cry.
And a world in so much despear, but seeing the brothers (even old). Aaaaaaah!
I like your story so much!
Please, please, please, continu it!
It's so freaking awesome! Thank you so much for writting it so far!
| Purpletshirt chapter 18 . 7/3/2016
Finish it! it might have been three years but, still finish it!
| Chaos-for-eternity chapter 18 . 12/20/2014
Please update this story soon. I love it!
| Robin Lee chapter 18 . 11/11/2014
Wow, Annie! You are a super fan! I have essentially fallen out of the fan fiction world right now, and since I started this ten years ago, it's highly unlikely it will really be finished. If it DOES finish, I can't guarantee it would be any good...but since you're so passionate, I'll do my best!
| Hipster-Dragon-3 chapter 18 . 8/16/2014
Love it! Hope you'll continue, this story is definitely one of the fanfictions I have read.
| Annie chapter 18 . 5/9/2014
i think i forgot to write last week... oh well. can you please write more chapters to this story? i really love your work and would like to read more. please write...
| Annie chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
oooookaaaaaaayyyyy... i think it has been a week. or has it been longer? i dont know, im not really keeping track. how are ya doin? oh wait i forgot why im writing this. can you pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeee write more chapters? i need to read. and im sure other people want to read to. i will try to tell u this in the polite way possibe, GET YOUR LAZY BUTT ON THE COMPUTER AND WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS! hope i wasnt to harsh. please don't keep me waiting...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/25/2014
ok, forget i said once a day. lets make it once a week... starting now. WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!...please...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/21/2014
seriously. please write... i love reading and i love your story and i want to know what happens next... its verry interesting...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/21/2014
im gonna tell you to write more chapters everyday until you write more chapters so prepare to be annoyed... WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!...please...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/20/2014
you MUST finish this story! i...need...to...read!
| Verran chapter 18 . 11/20/2013
What a chapter to return with - it hasn't lost any of its despair. The one thing that has stayed with me from this story is the execution flashback, and everything in this chapter, even the contrasting scenes with the Mushrooms and Kelley, feed back into that.
It's lovely to see an update to this - I hope it won't be too long before the next one. Great to see it's not dead!
| Amazing-Thalia-Grace chapter 17 . 6/10/2013
| 999 the 9th chapter 17 . 2/14/2013
Just because this story is angsty doesn't mean it shouldn't be in the Mario is a beautifully written story, and to not complete it would be a shame. I wait for the next update with bated breath.