|Reviews for The Sun Always Rises|
| Purpletshirt chapter 18 . 7/3
Finish it! it might have been three years but, still finish it!
| Chaos-for-eternity chapter 18 . 12/20/2014
Please update this story soon. I love it!
| Robin Lee chapter 18 . 11/11/2014
Wow, Annie! You are a super fan! I have essentially fallen out of the fan fiction world right now, and since I started this ten years ago, it's highly unlikely it will really be finished. If it DOES finish, I can't guarantee it would be any good...but since you're so passionate, I'll do my best!
| Hipster-Dragon-3 chapter 18 . 8/16/2014
Love it! Hope you'll continue, this story is definitely one of the fanfictions I have read.
| Annie chapter 18 . 5/9/2014
i think i forgot to write last week... oh well. can you please write more chapters to this story? i really love your work and would like to read more. please write...
| Annie chapter 18 . 5/2/2014
oooookaaaaaaayyyyy... i think it has been a week. or has it been longer? i dont know, im not really keeping track. how are ya doin? oh wait i forgot why im writing this. can you pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaasssssseeeee write more chapters? i need to read. and im sure other people want to read to. i will try to tell u this in the polite way possibe, GET YOUR LAZY BUTT ON THE COMPUTER AND WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS! hope i wasnt to harsh. please don't keep me waiting...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/25/2014
ok, forget i said once a day. lets make it once a week... starting now. WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!...please...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/21/2014
seriously. please write... i love reading and i love your story and i want to know what happens next... its verry interesting...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/21/2014
im gonna tell you to write more chapters everyday until you write more chapters so prepare to be annoyed... WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE!...please...
| Annie chapter 18 . 4/20/2014
you MUST finish this story! i...need...to...read!
| Verran chapter 18 . 11/20/2013
What a chapter to return with - it hasn't lost any of its despair. The one thing that has stayed with me from this story is the execution flashback, and everything in this chapter, even the contrasting scenes with the Mushrooms and Kelley, feed back into that.
It's lovely to see an update to this - I hope it won't be too long before the next one. Great to see it's not dead!
| Amazing-Thalia-Grace chapter 17 . 6/10/2013
| 999 the 9th chapter 17 . 2/14/2013
Just because this story is angsty doesn't mean it shouldn't be in the Mario is a beautifully written story, and to not complete it would be a shame. I wait for the next update with bated breath.
| Super-taya chapter 17 . 3/23/2012
thanks for the good read, well worth the evening it took to read. I've been on the edge of my seat the entire way- a plotline where bowser's in control, and the ohter worlds are barren is really deep. I'm excited to read more, so keep going!
| Verran chapter 17 . 1/18/2012
What a delight to find a gem such as this rising to the top of the archives after so much time. I had never considered what a post apocalyptic Mushroom World might be like, and you painted this one very well - not just the Mushroom Kingdom but the other associated worlds that the characters visit throughout these chapters so far.
The structure of this feels like you're into the second part of a three-part adventure, the first dealing with Luigi and Mario re-discovering themselves and ending with rescuing Peach. You haven't pulled any punches with this first part either - both Mario and Peach physically damaged, and Luigi's loss being Daisy's execution. This has turned the main characters' personalities on their heads, to the point where they didn't even recognise themselves or each other any more. For the supporting characters it has turned them into much grimmer and solid characters than you would normally see from the Mushroom folk, so well done there.
The horrifying flashbacks sharpen the present-day storyline, and considering that some of these events shape the way the characters now conduct themselves, I don't think they were overdone at all. Having said that, the writing from Chapter 12 onwards (Where I consider Part 2 to begin) has a much cleaner style to it, without losing any of the edginess, although I did feel a sense of it being rushed in places around Chapters 14 and 15.
This story kept me reading from start to finish in one go. Now I feel that great things are afoot - Mario's side is strengthening, but at the same time there are possible weaknesses - Mario preoccupied with the prospect of becoming a father, Luigi deteriorating, and Kelley the wild card - well meaning perhaps, but also I think a little foolhardy. The Bowser in this story is not stupid!
Looking forward to the next instalment.