|Reviews for Caught in a Web|
| Psp reader chapter 18 . 7/22
Finally... that was an emotional rollercoaster... enjoyed and hated it at parts... unique fic though and for that thanks.
| Psp reader chapter 17 . 7/22
| Psp reader chapter 16 . 7/21
Finally! And ur stilo evil!
| Psp reader chapter 12 . 7/21
So much angst...
| Psp reader chapter 11 . 7/21
Evil! Evil i tell you! Cliffies! Aaargh!
| Psp reader chapter 9 . 7/21
You are evil! So much trouble for harry you gave, feels angsty... ish... really hope for a sweet ending though...
| guest chapter 9 . 4/20
OK honestly this story had a lot of potential to be really fun. First off I'm not bashing you or your story but I want to leave my criticisms in a positve way.
The story and premise itself is fun lighthearted and somewhat adventurous, but I find that the characters personalities and interactions bring it down.
I managed to reach chapter 9 before deciding to stop here because I just couldn't take the way it kept going.
Harry constantly fawns over Hermione, pisses her off, and then regrets it with his 'friends' saying how much of an asshole he is. This harry, in my opinion is a straight up idiot. He never learns from his mistakes, he just makes a half added apology and then makes them again in a few hours.
Now his so called 'friends' who don't do anything to actually help his character, try to help him change the way he thinks, and dont realize he was abused from a young age and actually never understood what love is, also kind of tick me off.
Ron knows he had bars in his window for Pete's sake, and all he does is laugh at his mishaps, and then get angry when he doesn't know how to properly act.
Neville and Ginny come across as complete and utter jerks. After they find out harry is having these issues with his feelings they not only ask him his opinion on their perfect little romance, but they proceed to ask him who is going to the ball with RIGHT IN FRONT OF HERMIONE. The person whom he is having major issues interacting with daily. What the hell? Also, they have already tried forcing him to talk with her after divination with Firenze and we all saw how that went.
Also why haven't they told the headmaster yet? A love potion of any degree is treated with the utmost care, and I'm pretty sure is banned at Hogwarts. Everyone is the story feels like either morons, inconsiderate jerks, or layabouts who don't actually go beyond the person of someone.
I'm sorry I really tried to get into this story but its just to much of an endless cycle in which everyone has negative interactions with each other. I have nothing against you either, so I wish you good luck with the rest of your works.
| chadairuler chapter 17 . 8/6/2014
Oh. I don't even know what to say. 'NOOOOOOO' obviously but you deserve so much more. I love the choice of vocabulary that you use and everything. I love the Hermione and Harry that you created. It's just beautiful. See you in the next chapter.
| chadairuler chapter 3 . 7/30/2014
Oh my, this as a wonderful story. At first I wasn't sure if I'm gonna like it because I don't like the idea of the love from a test-tube, however, I love your style of writing as well as humour. I am so happy that I have still 15 chapters to read!
| Ice Demon Ranger chapter 18 . 7/18/2014
A really good story.
| S.P. Tripathi chapter 18 . 6/22/2014
This is awesome!
Harry is charming!
Hermione is lovely!
And you are simply B-R-I-L-I-A-N-T!
Love this story!
| Exivus chapter 18 . 11/26/2013
The angst was so thick, you could cut it with a knife. But, the romance was worth it.
| lyaser53 chapter 18 . 7/11/2013
You have to write the sequel...this was beyond excellent!
| AllWasWell07 chapter 14 . 1/2/2013
That was the most beautiful flashback.
| Charlemagne Gryffis chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
HA HA HA...