Reviews for My Last Wishes
PrincessInMars chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
*sniff sniff* that was one of the BEST POEMS EVER! Soooo sad! and I love it!
Delyra Broken chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
sweet, dark and sad. i loved it, and so, cried. anyways, great writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Touching
Yoh. A chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
Loved it *I am crying just so you know*
april chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
SWEET
ISoundLikeARockstar chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
OMG. That is so sad. I'm like on the verge of crying. You should make into a story. It would be so sad tho. I'm gonna go cry now.
Jncera chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
Aw, that is so sweet and sad. Dude, Nightwing is like...*sizzle*!
Killer Moth chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Full of deep pathos and angst. That's what Robin or Nightwing and Raven are all about. A beautiful,emotionally intense poem,I hope you make more poems like this in the future. Now life stuff:I'm getting a new computer,end of next week so once I set it up and return from Origins,we'll begin our machinations at last. There is also a Madonna interview on 20/20 Friday. Thought I should bring that to your attention. Until then,my dear,stay safe.
MystiKoorime chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Heyy Heyy

It's me CrazyNCute1314...aw this story was very sad, but sweet, and well written. Great Job!

Raven and Robin!

MystiKoorime
Katylar chapter 1 . 5/22/2004
I'm going to review your stuff, so that you'll review mine! I know, sneaky...

Anyway, very good poem, It's almost like a song, a very sad one at that.

Loved the lines:
'Here inside my mind, I hold thoughts of you.
Here inside my heart, I hold feelings for you.
Here, right now, I hold my last wishes.
My last wishes to stay in your arms forever more.'

and
'I hold the last image of your loving face in my mind.
Fading to black.'

Great work, Vicky.
lily chapter 1 . 3/9/2004
(tear) man (tear) that was really good. I havent read a poem like that in a while. It was so beautifully sad (tear)
DracoTelitha chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
...It's jus so beatiful. All that I can say without crying.
evildemon chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
That made me cry You are number 1 poem writer.
KaliHestia chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
HA, there are more like me. I really liked your poem. Spaces between some of the lines would have been cool, but hey it's your style. Keep writing
STAY FROSTY
Shadow eXtreme chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
That was strange, but somehow good.