Reviews for Ranma OneHalf: First steps
Lyxi chapter 9 . 6/19/2022
A bit hard to believe the chinese military could take the amazons. We've seen bigger acts of destruction in Ranma 1/2 than what they could manage with anything short of a full scale air strike and the martial artists take that and survive.
ramunes chapter 63 . 5/14/2022
will there be any more chapters
Y2Ranma chapter 7 . 7/14/2021
Uhhh you do realize that when they arrive you establish that Genma, Soun, Kasumi & Nodoka we’re there NOTHING about Nabiki or Kuno, they just appear after supper.

No mention of their arrival or already being there
Aleucard chapter 63 . 6/27/2021
Any chance you'll continue this one? It's interesting, despite how sprawling it gets across the fandoms.
Guest chapter 2 . 4/3/2021
it seems interesting but i think it's quite a bit fast-paced. I'd also would have liked to read more about how Akane had coped with the curse, their emotions and such. I'll continue to read for now and tell you what i think :)
Miles'Tails'Prowers chapter 42 . 10/7/2019
I cannot BELIEVE how long it took me to notice the reference you've been making. I first read this story over 5 YEARS ago, and I only just noticed the FLCL reference! God's, I'm blind.
Bigou chapter 5 . 10/1/2018
About the "it's family name first in Asia", know that for French people it's perfectly fine to do the same, they even consider it to be more professional. (Although it's less and less done.)
Naora91 chapter 62 . 5/29/2018
I liked this story and wish you'd continue it. It was nice watching your writing improve as you went along.
tacaloking chapter 4 . 3/25/2016
you repeat one of your sentences it this chapter i thought i should tell you because i know how hard it is sometimes to keep track i learned how to not make that mistake as conmanly as i use to
Guest chapter 11 . 12/16/2015
When they get after Lia for showing the curse before explaining instead of "Sorry, I forgot" why not say "Sorry, I thought because this was your home town everyone knew about you & would tell their children"
The Fear That Keeps You Wake chapter 63 . 8/31/2015
Next chapter when?
Guest chapter 7 . 8/7/2015
just no. NO damit. i can see them not talking 1 maybe 2 years but 12!.. now i cant see Shampoo staying their for 12 years or any one else to make them not phone home. besides that Shampoo would have chased them. and remember she found him after he swims back to japan. now other BIG OOC where when he attacked Shampoo. and u-chan so angered that he could kill them please if he was like that he would already hate aknae. then he becomes lot more smart then he is. now two 18 go training and don't have sex for 6 -7years please. i can see it if they last 2 maybe 3years and that is stretching it. and add in the fact they already love each other just cant see even if they are gay
pokermans100 chapter 11 . 4/19/2015
Genda genma panda
Guest chapter 63 . 3/7/2014
WE WANT MORE
Guest chapter 63 . 3/7/2014
"I'm gonna finish First Steps if it kills me?"
These are the last wors of Zombie Boy it's sad that a great Fic goes...unfinished...Well I guess this is premature because my friend says he's alive writing Echos of Eras Past but that can't be I mean how can he turn his back on everyone that has been waiting FOUR years for the next chapter of First Steps?
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