Reviews for Ranma OneHalf: First steps
Naora91 chapter 62 . 5/29
I liked this story and wish you'd continue it. It was nice watching your writing improve as you went along.
tacaloking chapter 4 . 3/25/2016
you repeat one of your sentences it this chapter i thought i should tell you because i know how hard it is sometimes to keep track i learned how to not make that mistake as conmanly as i use to
Guest chapter 11 . 12/16/2015
When they get after Lia for showing the curse before explaining instead of "Sorry, I forgot" why not say "Sorry, I thought because this was your home town everyone knew about you & would tell their children"
The Fear That Keeps You Wake chapter 63 . 8/31/2015
Next chapter when?
Guest chapter 7 . 8/7/2015
just no. NO damit. i can see them not talking 1 maybe 2 years but 12!.. now i cant see Shampoo staying their for 12 years or any one else to make them not phone home. besides that Shampoo would have chased them. and remember she found him after he swims back to japan. now other BIG OOC where when he attacked Shampoo. and u-chan so angered that he could kill them please if he was like that he would already hate aknae. then he becomes lot more smart then he is. now two 18 go training and don't have sex for 6 -7years please. i can see it if they last 2 maybe 3years and that is stretching it. and add in the fact they already love each other just cant see even if they are gay
pokermans100 chapter 11 . 4/19/2015
Genda genma panda
Guest chapter 63 . 3/7/2014
Guest chapter 63 . 3/7/2014
"I'm gonna finish First Steps if it kills me?"
These are the last wors of Zombie Boy it's sad that a great Fic goes...unfinished...Well I guess this is premature because my friend says he's alive writing Echos of Eras Past but that can't be I mean how can he turn his back on everyone that has been waiting FOUR years for the next chapter of First Steps?
Chaosqueen chapter 52 . 3/7/2014
Should had Ranma say
"Picolet, I told you there was no way in hell I'd ever arrange a marriage for any of my children"

Before Picolet mentions that Genma's stomach made another arrange marriage & after he tells everyone that

"After the surprise of the arrange marriage with the Sano's Me & Mother talked it over any more arranged marriages & we would either have you skinned or stuffed" Ranma turns to Lia "so honey which would you prefer a Panda rug or a stuffed Panda?"
Ranmamania chapter 44 . 3/5/2014
Should have had Ranma state that he was only going talk to Naota not kill him before Akane & Lia hit him and that if he did kill him it would have at his place so it would seem like his clan did it
Guest chapter 38 . 3/3/2014
There's no wy Lia's only 95 pounds
Chaosqueen chapter 32 . 3/3/2014
I would have loved the line "A God tried to kill Akane and I killed him so if I did that for the woman I love just think what I'd do for MY daughter"
Guest chapter 30 . 3/3/2014
Several chapters ago Makoto's mother died & now she's alive how?
Guest chapter 22 . 3/2/2014
Did you realize Chris-chan sounds exactly like Christian
Ranmamania chapter 4 . 3/1/2014
I found something wrong with this chapter, at one point it goes...

That they successfully completed there mission: Make it home without waking the neighbors

Then Ranma wakes up noticing she's in Akane's bed with a naked male Akane wakes her tells her what's going on they decide
"That's it no more booze for me" Ranma said as she shuffled into
"Me too" muttered Akane as he curled up te covers

Then it repeats the scene from Ranma waking up in Akane's bed before moving on to them finding out Ranma's Pregnant


When Ranma tells Akane why she won't have an abortion it her reason is good but you should added something like "Besides Akane it's OUR baby"
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