Reviews for Naked in the dark
Isabelf Drottning chapter 2 . 2/1/2012
"But I can carry you..."

That last line is heartrending.
lena chapter 1 . 1/20/2009
that was such a heartfelt poem. i could really feel that Frodo was actually saying that. keep up the good work!
Frodo's sister chapter 1 . 8/23/2005
This poem is true to their character.
Michelle Frodo chapter 2 . 6/30/2004
*rubs eyes and stares in disbelief*

Is this really a Frodo and Sam poem of yours that I have not reviewed? I didn't even know this one existed! why didn't you tell me? and you posted in APRIL? APRIL? OH My-Gosh-and-Gollum-Golly!


I think the two poems work really well together. Though I do prefer this chapter, I think the two endings are the best parts. And you know that my favourite line from both book and film is I can Carry you, so it was a fab line to end on.

The rhythm was slightly off in places, but I think I can forgive you that, as you delivered such a fantastic piece of work with so much feeling!

Keep writing, you don't do enough of these any more!

Love, Hugs and Shire Ale

Your Forever Devoted Best Friend


Leggy's biggest fan chapter 2 . 5/26/2004
OK, so I said the last poem I reviewed was my fav. but I've just changed my mind. This was awesome. Well done.
Leggy's and LegyLuva's biggest fan hehe
Mewsette chapter 2 . 5/11/2004
I think your poems are really good, with lots of emotion packed into them, and the writing is clean and economical. Write some more, please
Anastasia Who chapter 2 . 4/13/2004
This was really good. Awesome poem. It is so nicely written and I love the way you ended it. I loved this part
'As last the light I see
And I know what I must do
I can’t carry it for you
But I can carry you'
That was beautiful
G chapter 2 . 4/10/2004
-These work well as companion poems, especially with the contrast between Frodo's "darkness" and Sam's "light."
-you did a good job of conveying each characters' feelings and state of mind through poetry
-Through your words I could feel Frodo's dependency on Sam, and Sam's determination to help Frodo
DreaminofLorien chapter 1 . 4/9/2004
This poem is great and I cannot wait until Sam's POV comes up.. U are a great writer!
Daughter of Elessar chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
I really enjoyed this. Well done! :)
~Vané Alasse
Gentle Hobbit chapter 1 . 3/10/2004
I particularly liked this couplet:
"I see him in every living thing
Sometimes he is in you"
What a chilling idea, that at that point in the journey, he can see the Shadow even in Sam.
Michelle Frodo chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Aw *sniff*
That was fantastic! I loved it I loved it I loved it!
Really really, that was just so great!
I especially liked the Lines:
"There is nothing to protect me
No veil from the wheel of fire
I have struggled on for so long
But I can climb no higher"
and whose heart would not break at such wonderful lines as:
"So Sam please don’t leave
Leave me here alone
I can no longer stay in this place
Sam please take me home"
Really did make me feel so aw. I swear, I almost had a tear in my eye then. Brill, Deff one of the best you have ever written I think. And thats as High a praise as I can think to give. I can't wait for Sam's version!
Love, Hugs and Shire Ale
Your Frodo
Coolio02 chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
Aw, that was a very touching poem. Good job and I hope you continue soon:-)
alleajandra chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
WOW. That's really really really good. Kudos to you!
But anywho, I loved how you incorporated things they said in the movie into the poem. It made it more genuine. GOOD JOB!
Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
This was really good. Really sweet. Poor Frodo. I can't wait to hear the one in Sam's point of view.
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