|Reviews for Aluminum and Steel|
| hezziebob182 chapter 1 . 8/29/2005
Cool. Nice job.
| dokushoka79 chapter 1 . 3/8/2004
this was a very insightful piece. you truly captured the personalities of the two girls in the aluminum and steel. i liked thinking that it was because of this art work that sent adam over to talk to joan. great job! hope to read more of your JoA fanfics!
| noavail chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
nice metaphor. i like the way you described the little processes involved in making the sculpture-good descriptive language here.
| Admiral Lily chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Wow! Insight of all insight! That was fabulous. You managed to bring out a lot of the things I've been thinking but unable to put into words. I loved the symbolism and how true it seems to each of the girls. Very cool. Rock on!
| hgill chapter 1 . 3/6/2004
wow that was so good i really liked it u rite really well totally got the visuals and new what u were talking about