Reviews for That Part of Me
Nal'dralar chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
OK correction no. 1, write a SUMMARY! If you want people to read this you gotta have a freakin SUMMARY. 'PanTrunks' is not a SUMMARY. We have absolutely no idea whatsoever what this story is about, whether it is an AU or a actual GT fic. Now for correction no. 2, tell us what the hell happened. you've just skipped major background info! we have no idea whatsoever what happened in those five years as Pan grew to the age of five! And then you majorly skip another seven years and don't freaking tell us what freakin happened. Come on. Otherwise besides of all that your story starting along OK. Just write a summary and tell us what happened.
update soon :)
FizzyBloo chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
one more fic and you'll be at 100! definitely an accomplishment, ne?
Trupan chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
update update update!
YOU HAVE TO!
blue-crystal-dolphin chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Great start of the story. I hope you bring out the next chapter soon.
Rose Vaughn chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
Great job! Please update soon!
Shima And Tempis chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
I like this, it's turning out well. You're jump into the dragonball z sections is rated a 9.5 out of 10.
-SAT
P.S. Continue!
ladybugg chapter 1 . 3/7/2004
I like. Please update soon, because I want to know why Trunks had to go back home. Not that I'm complaining or nothing. I also liked how you broke the time down. How she was five and then seven. That was neat. Update soon. Great job. LATERS.
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