Reviews for This Time Around |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This story really had an amazing start. It isn't the clichéd time travel story where the time traveler is too scared to do anything to mess up the timeline. I like that Hermione is actively trying to save lives. But what is ruining the story for me is how trusting she is of Peter. Please don't change a character's essence just for the sake of the plot. Hermione has always been a careful person. Remember Marietta Edgecombe? She literally jinxed the DA parchment in case they might have a traitor amongst them. So why on earth would she just "believe" that Peter, a cold blooded murderer, wouldn't try to kill her and not have him swear some type of vow to prove his innocence? I know that Peter hasn't committed those crimes yet, but the Hermione Granger we know would actually take precautions incase the worst does happen. Hermione is all about redemption, we know. But she does nothing without careful consideration. So that's such a disturbing fact that I can't just overlook. Hermione is way too careless. It would make so much sense for Hermione to be the careful and paranoid one, since she knows way more than anyone; and for her new friends to be like "no, Hermione. We've known Peter way longer than you do and we trust him more." But Hermione being the defender of murderers doesn't make sense. I'm way too logical for my own good but I just can't seem to get past that. |
![]() ![]() Hi, this is me again. I DO apologize for accidentally sending in a review that I'd written for another fanfic! I'm reading the two simultaneously and I messed up, I am so sorry! Your fanfiction doesn't contain Ginny so I bet that comment was confusing! Anyway, I really enjoy your work too, you're an incredibly talented writer and your plot is amazing so far! Thanks for writing and sharing, authors like you really make my holiday better! All the love! |
![]() ![]() I LOVE this story. I love love LOVE it. I can't express how invested I am! Thanks so much for writing this! Ginny is very well written, as are all the characters but Ginny especially really stands out. I adore that Sirius and Regulus are becoming closer: their lost relationship is one of the more tragic things in canon and we all know how tragic everything really gets from book 4 on. I'm so curious where this is going to lead! Thanks again for writing and sharing this masterpiece! You're awesome! |
![]() ![]() Ahhh I hate and love this! I want her to end up with Sirius but I don't want her to hurt Remus and with all they have been through! My hearrrrrrt! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You almost made me cry! But I likes the story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I had actually read the reviews but I couldn’t believe it… I thought maybe I did read them wrong, why? |
![]() ![]() ![]() So I have to write because my heart can’t take it. Why a love triangle between Sirius and Remus! It really broke my heart and Remus saying he wasn’t his friend. So sad. |
![]() ![]() Oh, like nobody, especially Remus, noticed Hermione following Sirius away from the table. She's not very SMART to knowingly or obliviously keep putting herself and Sirius in these compromising situations. Sirius is right about the kisses, she's cheating on Remus. She's cheating on Remus just minutes before she accepts his marriage proposal. It's not Remus who's honor is in question. Thanks for a really good story. |
![]() ![]() This was an amazing fan fiction. I read this in the year 2021 and I read about how you said the things about snape being bad and now that the seventh book has come out I’m sure that everything had made sense that snape was good and Harry was a horcrux. I loved this fanfic but I just hope there would be more hermione and sirius romance. You said that tonks and Remus wouldn’t really match but I beg to differ because opposites usually attract so Lupin must be attracted to tonks. As Jermaine to Sirius |
![]() ![]() Attempting to murder her and viciously outing Remus on top of her knowledge of the future and Hermione suddenly thinks the rat is just a poor misunderstood innocent? Please. Otherwise, love your story. |
![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story I always though of doing a Sirius x hermione time travel |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was a beautiful story ! I was happy, angry, afraid, scared ! A wave of emotions ! Thank you so much for this travel in time ! (My English is not perfect, so I'm sorry ! ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sirius is in love with Herimione Sue too because of cooouurse he is. Excuse me if my eyes roll out of my skull |
![]() ![]() Hi I was wondering if you can write a fanfic about Hermione and Remus's kid when goes to Hogwarts. I love this fanfic and your writing over all! 3 |
![]() ![]() this story is amazing |