|Reviews for Covenant|
| ContraryMaryBee chapter 12 . 9/18/2011
nu! update? please? this is so good! dramatic!
| A Changing Persona chapter 12 . 8/27/2011
THAT was a shocker.
| yuhki minamitani chapter 11 . 1/8/2010
omg! is itachi really some kind of traitor or whatnot? ah! i wanna know the truth! the real truth! great fic
| OrangeSpiral chapter 12 . 3/7/2009
so the spirit that lived inside of naruto was the 4th and that guy is the kyubi in the 4ths body didnt see that coming what will naruto do now and itachi and sasuke ...
| Erratus Lemures chapter 12 . 6/25/2008
It's... so sad... *sniff* I LOVE SAD ENDINGS!(Except the corny ones.)
| Inumaru12 chapter 12 . 6/10/2008
whoo I REALLY like this. I know you haven't updated in forever but if you did, that would be awesome!
| Jiran chapter 12 . 5/4/2008
Holy crap, that's awesome. Well done.
| Raine-of-the-Night chapter 12 . 3/31/2008
good story :) hope its updated sometime :)
| Thumbellina Grande chapter 6 . 1/29/2008
| Thumbellina Grande chapter 4 . 1/29/2008
aww! why does kyuubi have to die
| Thumbellina Grande chapter 3 . 1/29/2008
i love his his careless attitude and how much is he gonna show
| Thumbellina Grande chapter 1 . 1/29/2008
yay naruto has an oni-chan!
| oscar101 chapter 12 . 1/4/2008
| Sear chapter 12 . 12/11/2007
Despite being unfinished this is one of the most gorgeous pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. I love your opening of the fic. The fact that it is Gen gives the plot more impact as there's no mush to take away from the unfolding of events.
Your Itachi and Naruto complements each other very well, everything is slightly changed, still the same, new - but foremost it has more depth than what is usually seen in fanfiction. The plot twist at the end is stunning, and stunningly well done, too. It makes so much sense, and yet it blindsided me completely. (Furthermore I like that your Sasuke is somewhat petty, not the "all-noble Avenger" he's usually depicted as.)
The mechanics of the fic are good, too. The language is good, and generally you write well. All this makes for smooth reading, which is nice for a change here on the Pit.
I know it's been along time, but I would be very grateful to get to read the ending of this fic, even if it is rough or unfinished. I would just like to know what happens. I know what I would -like- to happen, but I'd prefer real closure.
| Ellysetta-Rainier chapter 3 . 11/4/2007
I like so far. You are a good writer.