Reviews for Flawed Perfection
Guest chapter 20 . 5/1/2013
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StoryTell chapter 10 . 4/25/2013
I'm sorry to bother you but I think there is something wrong with chapter ten...There are huge chunks missing...I've read this story before so I know what should be there and this is one of my fav chapters but it's all whacked out...
Guest chapter 26 . 4/22/2013
Lol. He was crying. I laughed.
Boggart chapter 23 . 4/22/2013
Um, why exactly is Harry screaming that Callahan is a traitor when doing so will have completely no use but waste his breath and embarrass himself? Typical Gryffindor LOL. Plus Harry and Voldemort are half-bloods, not mudbloods. Just in case you haven't noticed already
Ho hum chapter 12 . 4/20/2013
Ho hum. Harry is acting like a total sissy. I've been through that before and I would be horrified if someone talked to me about it. And Sirius is like, so #%* annoying. Why does he feel the need to call Harry "kiddo" every two seconds? Annoying as hell.
But other than that, your story is moderately good:)
MuggleCreator chapter 27 . 4/14/2013
The angst was very thick, but I loved the little moments in the story.
And this chapter... :)
RegulusBlackIsAHero chapter 22 . 4/9/2013
Damn it! Callahan was my favourite character!
CupCakeyyy chapter 11 . 4/5/2013
Huh? Ok I'm confused! I didn't really get the last chapter and the beginning of this one. It's like there's a huge part missing or something.. That much I could gather: Ginny and Harry obviously somehow pranked the Weasley boys and somehow Vernon reappeared and beat Harry up.. What happened to those parts? Were they deleated? 'Cause I don't think this was planned xD
9foxgrl chapter 27 . 2/28/2013
That was just a great story! I just laughed when Draco began his speech to little Aden.
geekzgalore chapter 12 . 2/27/2013
I think i will have to forget much logic work the sequences here:p
Guest chapter 2 . 2/22/2013
Threebroomsticks? That's in hogsmeade!
doctorwhofan5556 chapter 27 . 2/19/2013
Awesome story!
Sofi Weiny chapter 27 . 2/17/2013
AParselmouthsPatronous chapter 10 . 2/10/2013
um...have i missed something? i probably have, but this chapter only appears to contain random parts from scenes? it's probably just me, but it confused me a bit :D other than that, love the story, love the plotline, and i really like the situation beetween harry, draco, and snape that you have going on :D
Leanora chapter 27 . 1/26/2013
Another wonderful story! I love your work and this series you've created!
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