Great story. I love your writing style. But some people are copying your ideas.

I absolutely love all your stories! Your writing style is superb.

brilliant

It’s been bothering me for a while, but James’s parents were Fleamont and Euphemia Potter, not Gavin and Laura

I loved this! I'm balling my eyes out.

That hit deep...

I usually make it a point of reviewing any fanfic I've read and enjoyed, but I wanted to especially thank you for this story of the Marauders.

I have seen so many authors aspire to tell the tale of the Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot and Prongs, but very few actually make it all the way through and give us a complete vision of what they envisioned for the generation before Harry's.

Excellent work!

So , I've always wondered what had happened after Sirius had done that . But now , I feel like I don't want to know . If it's anything like you wrote , I think I'll just die .

YOU MADE ME FUCKING CRY WHAT THE FUCK EXCUSE MY FRENCH PLEASE.

damn why did they all have to die?

also if you need closure (like me ;( ) read some marauders afterlife things, or when harry comes to the afterlife cuz he dies

it helps

That's not how it happened... What about Snape? It was Sirius and James that met first... WHERE IS THE CANON

I know I'm a decade late with my review, but I wanted to tip my hat to you for your tenacity in writing this. MWPP-epic authors usually plan to cover age 11 to age 21… and fizzle out before age 14. I can see from the author's notes that it took you a few years, but you actually finished!

I liked the female OCs you created to round out Lily's circle. I cringed halfway through when I realized that Keira absolutely had to die for Harry to be without close magical family, and Kelly's death was a real gut punch too. Poor James. James seeing the thestrals was my favorite dramatic scene, with the break-in at Werewolf Summer Camp being my favorite more comic scene.

Thank you for sharing.

Hi! I just finished reading the whole story and I enjoyed it so much! I felt for the characters (particularly Remus, who's always been my favourite Marauder) and the ending was heartbreaking. You know how it ends and still, it gets you. I love how you characterised the distrust between Sirius and Remus. As a reader, you see it passing in the books but rather vaguely and this... this was real. I can only say wow. Right after I've finished writing this, I'll go to your profile and hope that you've written more stories. Big fan here! Love, Sam.

Hey, I don’t know if you are still reading reviews, but I must say: this is incredible! By far the best Marauder fic I’ve ever read, so glad this isn’t just another Lily/James Marauder story (though I like them too). I was reluctant at firt when I sae it was Remus PoV, even if I love him. But it’s fantastic how you develop the characters, your writing is amazing. I have to tell you, this story just became canon to me, I don’t think I can keep reading the Marauders fanfics without comparing them to this. You even got this suspicions between Sirius and Remus (which are canon). Applause!

feel sorry for remus he lost all his friends the people who stood by him when evryone else shunned him

I've not read many Maurader stories, but this the best I've read yet.

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