Reviews for The Last Temptation of Alfred |
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![]() ![]() ![]() oh man i was laughing myself sick over this story, i love it. it was awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed so hard in the end with Flash that I nearly cried. We need more Alfred love so thanks for sharing. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I laughed so hard my cat abandoned my nice warm lap, the absolute picture of affront. Thank you so much for the wonderful entertainment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love how you captured Alfred so perfectly. You even did the original characters pretty well. Oh man, it's just like Alfred to manage to write up a ton of embarrassing stories about Bruce without even hinting at Bruce's nightly activities. Hm... I wonder if those stories will ever be published in the future... on the Internet... and read by another Batman? |
![]() ![]() ![]() That is fantastically funny. I wish I could write you a better review but I really should be working on a dissertation. But it's hilarious and wonderful. Thank you for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, this actually made me giggle quite a bit. I love Alfred, and the fact that he won THAT much without even MENTIONING his employer's night job, is hilarious. I loved how you only alluded to facts, instead of spelling them out- I think that added to the humor, because it lets the mind wander ever so... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think i just laughed myself sick too! xD |
![]() ![]() ![]() laughing... (5 minuets later) Still laughing |
![]() ![]() Freakin' hilarious. Utterly loved the ending. That last line made me laugh so hard I may have inadvertently killed several thousand brain cells. I want to get me one of them spoons :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I am dead of laughter now. You've honestly slaughtered me! |
![]() ![]() That totally rocked. You could do a follow-up story on the rummage sale Alfred runs to unload all the junk! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad I read this. _ |
![]() ![]() I laughed hysterically the whole way through. Pitch-perfect Alfred (he roundly deserves his chance for payback and more stories like this). I almost never leave reviews, but this was too good not to comment. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This fic is amazing! I love the way you've written Alfred. Not to mention the boys; they're adorable here. Do you perhaps have anymore fics in mind using Alfred? Maybe even with Carruthers making an appearance? Though his part was brief, I'd love to see him in another fic. If Alfred won first through twenty-seventh place with just tales from Wayne Manor's kitchen, imagine what he could have won if he'd brought out Batclan stories... |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha you had me laughing for about 5 minutes at the end of this fic, Wonderful job! -Larry |