|Reviews for Heaven Coming Down|
| Falcon Horus chapter 1 . 10/19/2004
Really nice! I really enjoyed this. Thank you!
| Catherine Ace chapter 1 . 5/24/2004
I really liked this. Just last night I saw Underworld and loved it. Your portrayal of Selene was very IC and the writing flowed smoothly. Keep up the good work.
| hybridinhiding chapter 1 . 4/22/2004
I think in my honest opinion that this is one of the coolest writings here in ff.n. If you write any more I'll be sure to R& of luck in your writting.
| Namarei chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
Wow. This is amazing, I really must worship the ground you tread upon for this.. This is.. The best fanfiction of Selene I have seen.. Ever. It's just amazing, and I seriously hope you might reconsider doing more chapters. I have yet to read some of your greater works though, such as Hybrid Wars and The Covenant, which I have been told are the two greatest movie adaptations in existance. Judging by this one, I believe.. O_O Good luck in the future, and may heaven shine upon your path.
| Xerios chapter 1 . 3/19/2004
I applaud thee. This is very good, much better than mine...
| Luwana-Fluff-Dragon chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
Wonderfully done, as usual :)
One small nitpick. Starts off fantastic, Selene angst anger hot classy. But after that... it feels like there needs to be something to make her cry. As someone who's repressed tears for nothing more than a few tears, I can vouch for it taking a bit more than just wanting to cry. The tears won't come. And Selene's been repressing for about 20 times longer than me.
If there were something, even a little thing, to make her snap, to push her over the edge. That's all it needs, just a little something, even if it seems insignificant at first glance. That would make it perfect.
| Blue Eyes At Night chapter 1 . 3/18/2004
You might like to know that there's a song called Heaven Coming Down by a good band called "the Tea Party", maybe afew rock lyrics to spice this up? Not that it needs it.
| Erica chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
Another wonderful ficlet! You captured Selene's inner conflict very well!
| vanimaelf chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
Wow, this is really good. Are you going to continue? Please do. You have grabbed my attention and I want more! lol
| Viktor's Vixxxen chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
That was so beautiful! I loved it so much! You really went into Selene's mind, it was magnificent! Keept up the good work!
| Moo Chapman chapter 1 . 3/13/2004
You've done it again yet another masterpeice