Reviews for The Forbidden One |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great story ;) really love it ;) |
![]() ![]() Awsome story. I hope their's more, and if so, I can't wait to read it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() No problem. Thats what readers are for. LOL. You should put up everything whatever you have cause i want to see how this is going to turn out. So hurry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't mean to be mean but why do you have two chapters with the same story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah is this supposed to be the same as part 7? because it is. I WANT NEW PART! :) Laheara |
![]() ![]() Aw. OMG that was sad. I like the suspense keep going this is a very mysterious story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW :) great story can't to find ouy whats gonna happen |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG what.. how... Ok got to take a step back here that was unbelievable. Future slowly changing, ery nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAT! How the heck is that possible? There has to be more! I need to know how this comes to be! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hurry and write more...this is GREAT so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is GREAT! more soon...PLEASE! lol |