Reviews for The Forbidden One
buffspike chapter 9 . 4/2/2004
great story ;) really love it ;)
Melissa chapter 9 . 4/2/2004
Awsome story. I hope their's more, and if so, I can't wait to read it.
HallowH8 chapter 8 . 3/25/2004
No problem. Thats what readers are for. LOL. You should put up everything whatever you have cause i want to see how this is going to turn out. So hurry!
HallowH8 chapter 7 . 3/24/2004
I don't mean to be mean but why do you have two chapters with the same story.
Laheara chapter 8 . 3/24/2004
ah is this supposed to be the same as part 7? because it is. I WANT NEW PART! :)
Laheara
anonymous chapter 7 . 3/23/2004
Aw. OMG that was sad. I like the suspense keep going this is a very mysterious story.
piperloverleo chapter 7 . 3/23/2004
that was great update soon please
buffspike chapter 7 . 3/22/2004
WOW :) great story can't to find ouy whats gonna happen
goldstranger chapter 5 . 3/20/2004
OMG
what..
how...
Ok got to take a step back here that was unbelievable. Future slowly changing, ery nice.
goldstranger chapter 4 . 3/18/2004
WHAT!
How the heck is that possible?
There has to be more!
I need to know how this comes to be!
CrimsonDusk chapter 4 . 3/18/2004
Hurry and write more...this is GREAT so far!
CrimsonDusk chapter 3 . 3/15/2004
This story is GREAT! more soon...PLEASE! lol