Reviews for Guardians of Pokemon |
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![]() ![]() you need to write alotttttttt slower and when your using speach have a new line per person |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice and happy 1000th reviewer |
![]() ![]() ![]() For reference, you still haven't added the Fairy Guardians (if you will at all) and the evil Ghost, Fighting and Poison Guardians. Nice story so far though, I hope school won't stop you updating for too long, I look forward to seeing this story continue! |
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![]() ![]() This is pretty good |
![]() ![]() ![]() And yet, 7 years later, and it has still not been updated |
![]() ![]() ![]() brock saying 'Loooving you!' to a tree that was so funny :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() "near future" ...it's been 6.5 years already... ;_; |
![]() ![]() WHY?WHY MUST ALL GOOD POKEMON STORIES HAS TO END UP AS POKESHIPPING? |
![]() ![]() booooo misty! i hate her! |
![]() ![]() aww ash and green should've kissed. |
![]() ![]() Green should've trolled that tomboy mermaid. |
![]() ![]() eww,i hate pokeshipping |
![]() ![]() i hope you make a chapter where ash kicks gary's stupid ass, i am sick of him! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When I compare this chapter and chapter 1, I find that the story, in writing quality, disregarding the plot, has gotten a lot better. You include more punctuation with the talking, and that helps to pace my reading subconsciously. Plot-wise, it's still the spastic heap of summarized content that it's been since Chapter 1, and it certainly is different from other fanfics, but I've managed to read it in a way so that the plot faults that would upset me in a more serious story are actually amusing in this parody-style story. It's a large change in style from what I'm accustomed to, but I'm willing to give it a try. |