Reviews for The Legend of Zelda: Ruto's Destiny
bambam12 chapter 15 . 11/9/2011
can you make an alternet ending were they get eaten or killed cuse i just fucking HATE Ruto!
Hermes Moon Lady Serene chapter 15 . 2/25/2006
*tears of happiness* I love this fic...I've been reading this fic like for a full year, before I even got my own account here. It has to be tough to do both versions, but you seem to like to challenge yourself with it and that's good! I love Ruto alot, even before reading this fic. I do hate how everyone describes her as a bad guy, she's not a bad guy, she's just doesn't act like a princess...Although I do agree that she's a little harsh on Link when first meeting him, but that's just me...Anywyas, keep the good work, LaAri-san! And nwo, if only someone would do a similiar story where Zelda isn't such a damsel in distress... .; Ja'ne.
Alexander - Godslayer chapter 14 . 9/4/2004
Well well well...

What a great fic! It's very original!

By the way, I like more the history of the "Water Lizard" in Zora Domain, I think it is better...

I just hope that Ruto and Link end up together... I like that couple _

Anyway, Keep writting!
Lauren Oceon chapter 15 . 7/17/2004








(and I like THis version better than the other)





(please XD)
Hand of Judgment chapter 8 . 6/8/2004
Hi! The fight had me on the edge of my seat (really! I fell off twice!) Normally people either don't describe dungeons and fights much, or make characters demi-godly. Your description of ancient Zoras reminded me of Silvestris' masterpiece (and may anyone who thinks otherways be damned to listen to polka and yodeling and eating healthfood for eternity!): Wizard of Water, only he has the fish-like tail on his head, and his other tail doesn't have gems. I really suggest you check it out at w. silvestris zeldapictures. asp? status waterwiz (only no spaces in it) and his/her other art. Looking foward to reading more tomorrow!

Ja ne _~
Faroe Greensleves chapter 3 . 5/16/2004
o!poor misu..*tear tear* *faroe runs back and fourth to the pool carring random items with her* ok, gotta see what faroe is up to ! caiozzers! *kisses and huggs* faroe .
Faroe Greensleves chapter 2 . 5/16/2004
o.0 big fissie thingie...freaky! coolio!
*faroe grabes a rubber snake and flies around the yard* why does ruto even agree to the "bonding" part? any who, keep writing the story! *faroe noods in the background happly*
coodles to you! Caiozzers! have a nice shinie sticker!
Faroe Greensleves chapter 1 . 5/16/2004
hey! this is the first zelda fanfic that i have read and i must say it isn't half bad. kinda short though.. but then again i have like 13 mure chappies to read. i hope that you write more though because im a fast reader and i'll probably be done with all of them in like... two hours. *faroe runs aound room hyperly throwing random books into the air and screaming w/ glee.* any who keep writing! caio!
Miss Maudlin chapter 15 . 5/15/2004
[sniff sniff] That was so sweet! [cries] I loved it! I think I'm beginning to like this version better...but I'm not sure yet. I'll guess I'll just have to read the next chapter of the other version to make my decision. Adios for now! _
Midnight Starfire chapter 15 . 5/15/2004
I have to agree with the other two reviewers before me, I also think you should take the second version and make another fic out of it. It would probably be easier anyway. As for this chapter, yes I did like the romance it was tastefully done. I liked how passionate this chapter seemed, and it was NOT corny at all. I like dramatic chapters/scenes but I cannot write them. For my fifth chapter I posted my thank yous in my bio. If you have not already seen that I mentioned how you actually got me to appreciate Ruto. Honestly I wasn't too fond of her until your story, but this fic changed that! Keep writing and update soon!
Raynre Valence - Sage of Time chapter 15 . 5/15/2004
Yes... flamminchica has a point. I was going to suggest that myself, but I wasnt sure as to how long this was going to be. Good job on this chapter, the Ruto/Misu scene was... interesting... Anyway, keep it up! _
flaminchica chapter 15 . 5/15/2004
me again! i like how you made the water "serpent" sound completely different in both chapters. this is going good. i suggest that you take the revised version and make another fanfiction out of it, that way it's under two names. like, take ever chapter with the water serpent as this big black thing (even the chapters where Ruto was fighting the serpent serpent) and name it the same thing, only put revised under it. that sorta thing. that way, you don't have to have confuzled readers and you can update either one on its own time and don't have to update back and forth.
Raynre Valence - Sage of Time chapter 14 . 5/11/2004
Horrification... is that even a word? _ Good job on the chapter. Im in awe as to how fast you are getting these out. I hardly have any time to work on mine anymore...
I would suggest at the very beggining of each chapter from now on that you have something like:
Original Storyline (or) Alternate Storyline
You know, just to make it clear. _ Keep it up!
flaminchica chapter 14 . 5/11/2004
this was really cool! and you're going on with BOTH versions? that's alot of work! both are sounding good, and i can't wait for more!
Miss Maudlin chapter 14 . 5/11/2004
I really like both versions of this story, so I'm glad you decided to post both! You deserve so many kudos for this story it's not even funny. You're a great writer, if you didn't already know. Update soon, as always! _
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