|Reviews for Sailor Moon: Five Rings|
| Xoni Newcomer chapter 1 . 3/16/2004
It's a very original crossover. I've never seen Sailor Moon crossed with Five Rings. I must admit, thought, that I know next to nothing about Five Rings, therefore I suggest you slip history bits into the fanfic for people like me and others in my situation.
Your writing style seems good, if a bit simple. Rhone talks a bit strangely, but maybe that's due to him coming from another world.
I suggest you don't make things too simple as you write the story. For example, don't make Rhone's first encounter with the Senshi a chance encounter in the street. Many authors do that and spoil the fanfic.
Finally, I suggest you allow unsigned reviews. You'll get more that way.
| Galactic Crystal chapter 1 . 3/15/2004