|Reviews for Persephone|
| QueenCheetah chapter 13 . 12/30/2015
This was a pure delight to read- it was very amusing to see the YGO cast acting like Greek deities (because, honestly, the old legends were pretty much a soap opera before cable!).
I particularly enjoyed Mariku and Malik's interactions. XD The only thing I didn't quite get is Seto and Jou's roles- I would've thought the calculating and manipulative Seto would make a perfect war-god, while Jou (with his open emotions and occasional outbursts) would be a better Poseidon.
But otherwise very much appropriate and entertaining! I know it's a long shot, but it would be great if you could one day maybe upload another chapter or two; if you get the chance!
| DarkPki chapter 2 . 8/30/2015
This is amazing I'm working my way to be a good writer like you! Wish you luck!
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/1/2013
is there going to be a lemon soon? I wonder if Seto is going to speak up about how he was part of this whole... whole... mess.
| TimeAndRhythmDoesIndeedSleep chapter 13 . 7/2/2012
I found this story before and I read a bit of it, I didn't care for it. I found it again (was looking for tendershipping stories) and decided to give it a second change...I'm glad I did. I love the story so far and can't wait to see what happens next. I like everyone's interaction with Marik, especially Malik's. I also like that Ryou defeat him with just a look. I hope you continue on with this story and finish it. cheers/ciao!
| Darth Mudkip chapter 13 . 10/4/2011
Wow, I really hope that one day you cone back and finish this because it's awesome!
| Alpha-Starr chapter 13 . 8/17/2011
Hoping for another belated update. :)
Please continue! I love it. Persephone is one of my favorite Greek myths, and Tendershipping is one of my favorite pairings, so it all works out! I also really like the changes you've made... they make the story feel really unique and not just a copy of the original myth. Well done!
| monamourr chapter 13 . 7/16/2011
Awesome fic when will come the next chapter?
| FriendlyEvil chapter 13 . 4/3/2011
OMG Ryou!what have you done!
ah i love your story so much you've combinded the three things that i like greek mythology, yaoi, and ygo
thank you for writing this fic *glomps*
| SilverWhiteDragon chapter 13 . 1/9/2011
damn. update please? DD
| Reflective Reviewer 7 chapter 13 . 10/16/2010
Please, update this again! I loved this story when it was just the greek myth, now it has my favorite anime pairing! Whoo! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| Rio 2.0 chapter 13 . 6/22/2010
This myth has always absolutely intrigued me, and I like YOUR spin on it a LOT more. MORE HAPPY.
And so cute.
Mariku. LMAO! HILARIOUS. I love it. I hope to see the following final chapters hopefully one day! Its one of those stories I can see myself waiting for and STILL understanding whats going on.
| Ensign Klutz chapter 13 . 5/23/2010
Sorry I haven't reviewed in such a long time, I wanted to, but I was kind of upset that you hadn't updated in a long time. I'm sorry if that is petty of me, but I really like this story! You took two topics I enjoy and integrated them together.
Overall, it is an awesome chapter and I enjoyed the interactions with Malik and Mariku. I was also giggling like crazy at the end with Ryou and the pomegranate in his hand~! I love it! I hope you update soon!
P.S: Do you know how many kernels of pomegranate Persephone ate in the myth? Thanks~
| KuraRose chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
oh this just amazing i can't wait for the next update thank you for sharing
| Kagimine chapter 13 . 3/24/2010
*dies* sugar-top! XD XD XD XD so freaking funny!
| Kiki Lelsissia chapter 13 . 3/4/2010
I absolutely love this story so far. More people should write mythology based fanfics. That actually reminds me of an idea I had a while back, hmm... maybe I can bring my muse back and write some yami/hikari pairing Greek mythology based oneshots.
I must say, I loved how you managed to include Mariku/Malik while still keeping Mariku as Cerberus. I was a bit unsure how it would work, considering Cerberus is a three headed dog, but making Mariku a dog-like person works really well. Artistic license is an awesome thing sometimes.
I wonder what Malik's reaction to Ryou's announcement will be. Hopefully he's not too angry. Will you stick with the original plot of Persephone/Ryou spending 6 months in the Underworld and six months above ground? Actually, you don't have to answer that yet. I'll find out when you post the next chapter.