Reviews for Wake Me Up insideChapter1
mitty chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
interesting your getting there but i still think you need alot of work. you seem to be just rambling . . . but the idea and character is still somewhat in check please continue to write
psalm57 chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
I assume this is a POV for Josie. Very cute idea. I like the idea of seeing her in high school. I like the beginning. I can totally see her thinking of such a thing. I like most of her thoughts. For the most part they are right on. I would just change some of the negativity. I don't think she would be that negative and I would cut the cussing. I would never see Josie cussing like that. Maybe she would use the word crap but thats about it.